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Lalla_Dawn

Lalla_Dawn

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2021-05-16 JoinedBotswana
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  • Lalla_Dawn
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    She's alpha but she's scared? What's with the extremes? So confusing

    Ch 7 Have we met before?
    Taming The Twin Alphas
    Fantasy · Tondra164
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    Can't wait to see what happens next

    Ch 36 Not That Kind of Relationship
    Rosie's Games
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    The uncle killed the wolves because he was there, he's trying to frame beau's mate so he cn claim the alpha position

    Ch 22 Betrayal
    The Werewolf's Vampire Mate
    LGBT+ · WagS
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
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    WagS👏👏👏👏👏Brava. I love this story❤️👌 Print it out as a book.

    Ch 18 Missing him
    The Werewolf's Vampire Mate
    LGBT+ · WagS
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    Oh. My. Goodness😍😍😍😍😍😍

    Ch 14 Mating ritual
    The Werewolf's Vampire Mate
    LGBT+ · WagS
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    I'm in love❤️❤️❤️❤️

    Ch 9 I don't hate you anymore
    The Werewolf's Vampire Mate
    LGBT+ · WagS
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    Ch 11 Published!!!
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
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  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    😳🤭

    Ch 10 Chapter Ten
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    🙄😒Girl bye with all that negativity...

    Ch 8 Chapter Eight
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    🥺Okay I was wrong. She's messing up. Sorry fellas

    Ch 7 Chapter Seven
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    Oooohh😍😍😍😍🤭

    Ch 5 Chapter Five
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    Oh wow the restaurant guy is the brother?!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

    Ch 4 Chapter Four
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    He better not mess up😍 . . . Oh wait🤦he's a guy. Of course he will🙄

    Ch 3 Chapter Three
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
    Commented

    😏So far, so good....

    Ch 2 Chapter Two
    When The Lights Go Out (Sample)
    Urban · shayjonez
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  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    A nice book with potential, either as crime thriller mystery maybe. A little too short like you said. It lacked a little build up though. The setting; date year? Tech advancement? The characters; what's the story on her family and the VIPs? Why kil the son and where was she/how did she escape? Where has she been? The main character's story isn't clear; is she unhinged or just out for revenge? Will she stop now that she has avenged her family or now she's like the joker, making the world pay? And why the moniker 'poison'? And the red lips MO? The detective who figured it out, how did he? Why mock the chief for thinking it was a man, and how long had he known it was a woman? Why were the killings going on for that long with absolutely no info or leads on it? what was the publics view on the police's failure and how did it motivate them? why finally give him the case? Why is he dubbed 'the hero'? Like what's the backstory there? Too many holes, unexplained. And why would he put in all that work to (a) go see her without backup, and (b) get flustered then drugged, fully knowing her capabilities especially since she killed a lot of people, very important people in fact? Also what was the point of that last letter to the police? I love reading and I like your book. But it left me with so many unanswered questions that end up making the story lose it's appeal. Hope the book turns out Ace. Can't wait to read it🌟

    Ch 7 Why I wrote this story and why is it so short
    p.o.i.s.o.n
    Urban · day_dreamer_0144
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  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    ❤️🔥

    Ch 34 Playing the Game 6
    Rosie's Games
    Fantasy · B_Mitchylle
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    This guy's Confidence is off the charts. I love it! 👍👍👍

    Ch 24 Chapter 20: Kidnap? Just you guys? _2
    Ace Dragon Rider
    Eastern · Gao Sen
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  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    So far👌

    Ch 4 Chapter 2: Why is Talia Glowing?_3
    Don't confiscate my identity as a human race
    Urban · Poor Xixi
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  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    JHeart has a way to capture my heart❤️

    Ch 4 Death Of An Alpha 2 (Ch.4)
    The Alpha King's Nemesis
    Fantasy · JHeart
    detail
  • Lalla_Dawn
    Lalla_Dawn2mth
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    🫣🤭

    Ch 34 The Flowers Bloomed (Part Four)
    The Veil of Darkness
    Fantasy · Nightsummer20
    detail