Great story, i for one enjoyed it, all of the guys and other characters in here are great, I absolutely love the world you created here, writing quality is really good and quite easy to understand.
Okay sis, so far so good, i see you have written it in third person POV which is great, I love the story so far, it is well written and has an amazing plot, lol i love the princess stalker werewolf bodyguard, this is an original for sure and i hope to read more.
"Wow, that is a sad life, especially when you cannot choose the person you will or whom you want to love," the king said thinking he said that to himself and Cosmo sighed,
I like the concept of this story it is far different from your others and it has a lot of potential, i love your characters and the plot, keep up the good work and good luck with the wpc.