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Dread_Burrito_Fox1mthCommentedoh great, we have to deal with a weirdo that chants his skill names; Awesome, sooo cool and needed 👎🥱
"Accurate Throw!"- Dread_Burrito_Fox1mthCommented
In visual alone yes, physically no it isn't. Jupiter is a GASS giant what we see of Jupiter is not the surface of the planet but the top of its atmosphere, and the pressure of its atmosphere has crushed all probes practically instantly so it is unknown how big the planet of Jupiter truly is.
Lux was aware that Jupiter was the biggest planet in the Solar System. However, he didn't know just how big it was. - Dread_Burrito_Fox3mthPosted
There were some minor grammar and spelling errors, but nothing a reread can't fix. I enjoyed this world and its story so much that I would be ecstatic if I were to wake up in it one day. (Especially if the Laughing God deems me worthy of the class I desire). Fingers crossed for a sequel.[img=recommend]
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she was not a human she was a beast girl I remember her grandmother the adorable elderly cat lady, I claim shenanigans!
"Lamia grow up very fast. But I was a human to start with, and Cain transformed me to break a curse I was born with, so my appearance and my age don't necessarily match. Did he destroy a Sect and steal their Initiates or something, though? I mean, two of them are fairly powerful, but they're still just little kids and humans." Cyrene responded. - Dread_Burrito_Fox4mthCommented"Go on, show them the new skill." The old man urged Tena, who smiled at Cain, then abruptly transformed into a Golden Dragon whelp.
- Dread_Burrito_Fox4mthCommented"Exactly. Now I know exactly the cream-to-puff ratio for the perfect chocolate eclair. That pill saved me so much trial and error." Luna informed her proudly.
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Hey Dad-I mean Boss!
"Score. Thank you, Boss. We will take good care of the cake." Luna replied politely. - Dread_Burrito_Fox9mthCommented
corn bread of the traveler
It was almost dinner time on the farm, and the Echoes had gone all out today, celebrating a new Mythic food product. This one was not a fruit; they had managed to grow a Mythic Quality form of Corn. Even a few bites would sate the appetite, making it perfect for travel rations, and the taste remained that of regular sweet corn. - Dread_Burrito_Fox9mthCommented
"guild master dad" sounds so much better. 🤣 😂
"Note to self, Guild Master Cain sees everything." She muttered, reminding herself not to underestimate his sneakiness. She was certain that it was something essential to her class. - Dread_Burrito_Fox11mthCommented
what skin? he just bones
The three meter tall demonic Undead parried every swing of Nero's sword with a sort of ease that made Nero's skin crawl. - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
I have never heard the saying of "sweet mouth" in this connotation, I feel "silver tongue" would have fit better
Leon felt that this man was quite tricky. If he addressed those weaker than himself, then they would surely be swayed by his words. It would make them view him positively, while making them give in to his demands, as long as they were not too outrageous. To put it simply, he had a sweet mouth! No wonder he had been sent here! - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
BOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
Chuckling he looked towards the south, there is work to be done, no? Cities to burn, armies to raise and culprits to catch, it was clear from the start this path of his was simply a warpath. No amount of peace will last, the war to come with be bloody and long, surely he will take breaks. Yet that's like saying a soldier resting after surviving the day. Of course they would have to face the next day, that's just it. That soldiers peace was fragile and simply the time of his rest, his own peace and it doesn't last long. So Duth will be the same, yet more so intense, he didn't have the physical needs of a body, aside from a few complications. Its only his mental fatigue, therefore although he enjoyed his life. He had taken the path of blood, and blood he will have. - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
MWAHAHAHA!
[What Succubus needs the most to execute a brilliant plan? One who doesn't have the bouncy breasts and swaying hips to distract and delight her target.] It makes sense, but that doesn't make it any less amusing that the optimal form for a military advisor is a loli Succubus. - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
link get up?
On the other side of the carnival, where the food and games stand to give way to more exotic-type activities, two Elves are walking hand in hand. One fair in both skin and hair, though she's been trying to tan, the other ashen gray with shocking white hair. Both are wearing matching brown leather pants and boots with a green tunic and black sash, though the fair one's tunic is more of a dress than a shirt. - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrReplied to Dread_Burrito_Fox
Follow up; There is no excuse to justify making the reader have to do the authors job by connecting the dots while they are reading, I shouldn't go from reading that they just finished a fight on the highway to now they are suddenly in an alleyway without an explanation. How does this writing posting program not have a reviewing or revision process in place.
Ch 49 Start of the first Mainstream (4) - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
This sentence is a paradox, if you are returning to your own current position you are not moving!
-Your subordinates are returning to their present position. - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
Humans are animals! The words you are actually needing to use is humanoid or anthropomorphic. Yes Humans are animals, a Human is a mammal, mammals are a classification of animal!
"Sure enough, human animals are overwhelmingly powerful." - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
The niche/cliche of 'system bad make me angry must get rid of!' is really annoying. I agree with the god or whoever made the system, making a hurdle to stop those who are not worthy of becoming Gods is valid. Otherwise any average criminal/delinquent could become a God and run rampant. You've got to push past your limits to prove worthy of godhood.
While he felt it was not harmful to her, Leon suspected that this process was something that had to do with the System limiting those who were subject to it. He would have to give this line of thought some serious considerations! - Dread_Burrito_Fox1yrCommented
YOU DARE TO HARM MY LIEGE!
'These lowly scum! They dare disrespect my master?!'