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Your book should be called a paradox, how can it be so good and confusing/bad at the same time? This is the second best FanFiction Classroom of the Elite I've ever read. This book has character development It has a good story with good pacing It is not repetitive What makes this book confusing/bad? Lots of comedy, lots and lots. So comedy is bad for the book? No Everything too much is poison, that's what's killing the story, the excessive comedy I've been reading this book for over 7 hours and in my country it's already over 3 hours at night. AND as I said at the beginning, this is a paradox, some might call it love for your book. I hope this review helps you and doesn't discourage you, AUTHOR.
I find your comedy confusing and use of the author's 'name' excessive Each episode has a reference or relationship with the author and the breaking of the 4th wall seems forced and repetitive. M His character isn't Deadpool to be so comedic. His character should be more realistic and serious compared to his original story, I don't see any reason for the change in the character. An oc made more sense in your story. Apart from these flaws, your story is great and confusing.
Bunny Girl ?
perfeito é simples
Olá amigo , eu recomendaria você ler uma FanFiction de Naruto (The Last Rising Sun (Assassin) NotPolarArtic). Não está relacionado com sua obra , mas passa uma sensação de vida , é difícil de explicar, só sabe lendo . Não sei se vc vai gostar e bom sorte na sua arte , que é sua obra . PS:pode ajudar na sua obra , boa vida