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Cliffhanger_Rater16dCommented*They* had only... ...possibly shake *them*... ...witnessing it all for *themselves*... man, you struggled with them 🤣
But, Haven had never been the recipient of Dyon's rage. He only heard stories from afar… How could anything like a distant story,- Cliffhanger_Rater1mthCommented
1000 = one thousand. you wrote "... that lived one thousands and one thousands of years..." please fix this.
Because, the look in his eyes was gentle and had a hint of sadness, as if it was meeting a long time friend. The thing was with being a vampire that lived 1000's and 1000's of years, one got to read emotions on a face a lot better. - Cliffhanger_Rater1mthCommented
listen - 1000 does NOT = thousand / thousands!!! "1000" in letters is "ONE thousand" - hence the "1" at the beginning! you've been using 1000 in many places where you should've just used the word "thousand" instead. In this paragraph specifically, you wrote, "...can live up to one thousand and one thousand of years..." 🤮🤮🤮 this has been really annoying, and it's happening more and more the further I read. I know the story is finished, so it may not do very much....
"For one, the god Slayer is unable to leave the planet. It has no skills to do so, and there is no life on the planet that can help it do so. So we simply decided that the best thing to do would be to wait it out. Wait until the beast dies of natural causes, but strong beasts can live up to 1000 and 1000 of years, with some getting even stronger. - Cliffhanger_Rater1mthReplied to Cliffhanger_Rater
the familiars are also scum for not telling her anything.
"Quinn… be careful Jack… Jack…" Her words were faint after that, but she had one more thing to say." and… thank you for stopping me." Erin said with her final breath as her heart had stopped beating. - Cliffhanger_Rater1mthReplied to 9Yards_Ent
would she have killed them if her memory wasn't altered? no. which means she isn't the person who is truly responsible
"Quinn… be careful Jack… Jack…" Her words were faint after that, but she had one more thing to say." and… thank you for stopping me." Erin said with her final breath as her heart had stopped beating. - Cliffhanger_Rater1mthReplied to kiddrangon
100%!! if no one went after agent 4, that's just complete idiocy and honestly a forced plot point.... at this point, I wouldn't be surprised though.
"Even if Zero is unable to beat that thing, his master certainly will be able to," Agent 4 smiled. - Cliffhanger_Rater2mthReplied to Biro
that's what I thought as well, but there aren't enough ? (assuming every question mark replaces one letter), unless it's a typo
In?er?? La?: ??? - Cliffhanger_Rater4mthCommentedCh 2211 Blueprints
- Cliffhanger_Rater4mthCommented
so less than a millimeter? 😅
Two wisps of cold blue and hot red energy no thicker than a tenth of a centimeter were pulled in by the manifestation and palmed with violent force into Dyon's body. - Cliffhanger_Rater5mthReplied to Evan_bletz
the drain on the Lord of the mountain is probably increasing because of people connecting to the heavens (whether that be their strength increasing due to cultivation or something else), my guess is the celestial emperor wants to kill Yuan (and earth) before they can come back by wearing out the Lord. this would also explain why the upper heavens were told to help raise the people from earth.
Ch 1323 Earth - Cliffhanger_Rater6mthReplied to Benjamin_Gribnau
music to his ears 😭
"The World Tree wasn't actually the first lifeforms we encountered… We lost many elders in those times, but we persevered. We knew that this was the only chance we would ever get to reach the pinnacle. - Cliffhanger_Rater6mthCommentedThere were no seats or thrones. In fact, each one of them stood tall. It should have been an odd atmosphere, but it was actually awe inspiring. There was an aura that could make one's bones quack in the air.
- Cliffhanger_Rater6mthReplied to Benjamin_Gribnau
separate
Dyon's Chaos Flame had the Inextinguishable Heat Characteristic, making its ability to refine pills nigh untouchable. This didn't even mention the applicability of its Solidification Characteristic in refining pills! - Cliffhanger_Rater6mthReplied to UrBoyAD
I read that, but I thought that if he's in an area with high amounts of ambient force, it would satisfy the relation between creation and destruction, because he wouldn't be creating ore from absolutely nothing. It would be more of a transformation. If the creation/destruction topic applies to every tiny thing/process/skill like this, regardless of whether you're already paying a price or not (be it supplies, energy, or time), then every time someone uses a skill, recovery wouldn't just be as simple as recovering energy. It's one of Tolly's abilities, which I considered like Leonel and his crafting, Aina and her blood clones, etc.Regardless, this idea was mentioned in a future chapter.
Ch 2464 Poverty - Cliffhanger_Rater6mthCommentedCh 2464 Poverty
- Cliffhanger_Rater6mthReplied to DarthJarJar
It looks like it isn't just the nameless immortal god who is being reborn
Dyon snorted slightly. "Indra is a mere disciple of yours. He would be happy beyond words if he knew his Faith Seed aided you in reclaiming your true strength. - Cliffhanger_Rater6mthReplied to Benjamin_Gribnau
I believe there were several rare factors at play, each extraordinary in their own right, that ended up lining up perfectly and resulted in Junior. The difficulty in repeating the process is most likely mind-blowing
"Also, I've had no choice but to slow my soul cultivation. If I allowed my soul strength to grow at its normal pace, when the day came that I fused with my main body once more to complete the perfect constitution, the combining of our soul strengths would once again cause my plan to accelerate faster than it should." - Cliffhanger_Rater6mthReplied to MrHam_2232[Bonus chappy thanks to Mr. Ham <3 (1/6)]
- Cliffhanger_Rater6mthCommentedSergeant Moe's gaze went red. Just how many women and children had been in there? And yet their existences had been snuffed out? Just like that?