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Creten12yrCommentedah yes I forgot the grey rank. so you just nerfed the world.... fair.
Behind Jack is a Tauros with Light bronze talent and a Houndoom with Dark Grey talent. The Tauros was bred right here on the farm just like Mariah's Miltank. As soon as its talent was confirmed Dennis immediately gave it to Jack. Mariah secretly told the kids that Jack tried to refuse at the time saying it should go to his children. Dennis just snorted shoved the Pokéball in his hand and walked away before he could say anything else.- Creten12yrCommented
the levels and talents Dont match up. like isn't boufallant 40 and Taurus 46 also wasn't Taurus silver? the shiny Pokemon talent switch makes sense to change it to gold cuz shiny. anyways just wanted to say so. I'm just going to follow the most recent update on pokemon talent and skill although I believe Dennis' pokemon should be silver since he has to defend the farm if he can afford to get two for his daughters he can afford to get two for himself to protect his business and family. plus ex military should probably have a pokemon from his time there.
The adults stood facing the children with the three kids standing a couple of meters away facing them. Robert couldn't help feeling a little excited with so many talented Pokémon around at once. Dennis Tauros was Dark Bronze with Bouffalant being Bronze. Miltank was Light Bronze with Butterfree being dark grey. The twins Snubbull are both light silver. Vulpix and Eevee being Gold, overtaking the two Snubbull as the most talented Pokémon on the farm. There are two more Pokémon standing behind one more person. This person while not a member of the Leone family, was treated like one by all members. - Creten12yrCommented
the tumour makes sense the way you wrote it in it felt necessary like you did a good job not making him a Gary sue and making him not infallible by adding some hesitance and the major lack of experience actually mattering even tho he strong. like with the way he is described there is no point to stay at school otherwise, he just bulldozed everything and could have been a pro hero. now he has to learn finesse, now he has to be creative and he has to stay at school for that protection while he learns. otherwise it would have gotten kinda stale ya know? the attack on 2A is a wake up for everyone and we needed a bit more strife.
Ch 24 Prelude to the Festival