horrible grammar, word structure, and English. can't keep up with whom is saying what.

I like the idea with a female nfl player.

I agree. plot twist. lol

lol right?

can't wait either

other than minor typos I really like the plot line.

is English your first language? nothing makes sense

minor mistakes. accept vs except. weather vs whether. I'm not sure who proof reads but the grammar is making my skin crawl. lol. I love the story line though.

I don't know if you even realize you do it, but you use a lot of texting short cuts like "rn", and "af".