Daemon and viserys mother is Alyssa not daella

It’s great. Differs from all the other star wars self inserts by not being the usual jedi. Story is paced good and other aspects like the economy are well thought out

this is stolen work. the original is made by DeadlyMaelstrom711 on ffn and it is titled "Fire and Blood".

it's BBY= Before Battle of Yavin and ABY= After Battle of Yavin

only 8 chapters so far but the MC actually feels like an viltrumite and not a human with powers. no grammatical errors and such so good job author

i think you should just copy it as it would make for a better reading experience instead of having to switch to scp wiki for us readers

It's a fun idea and im looking forward to seeing where you take this

here are quite a few scp's you could do: 343, 073, 076, 682, 049, 079, 053, 035, 001 the gate guardian, 2399, 1000, 2317, 231,

i hope you continue writing this as it is a promising story. cant say much of it yet as it doesn't have that many chapters

really liked the start i hope you keep writing this

i am looking forward to see where this goes. i liked the small twist of him being a reyne and this has a more unique SI compared to other fics

love kingdom building fics keep going

Ashara dayne definetly

honestly one of the best GOT fics on this site. the mc is unique and strong but not so op that it would make the story boring to read. the other OC characters are nicely written aswell. great story keep going

its a good prologue but i think you should have not revealed that Sam is the grand maester and Tyrion is hand of the king as it gives a lot of clues on how the story will most likely end

im liking the story but i hope you dont do the whole westerlands will be its own kingdom thing

is the story abandoned?

its a good story although i am confused if this is going to be robert or rhaegar wins the rebellion.

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