SECOND XD

SPOILER ALERT Also... I feel like the personality of the MC suddenly changes after the first volume. She turned from an incredibly cold person to a super trusting girl. Her growth pace 📉📉📉. Shouldn't things go better for you after a reincarnation? Cuz things are definitely not. She turned from a ruthless and cold MC to a flower girl. I know that she sealed her emotions in her second life, but she was already cold and ruthless before that. How can she suddenly become the way she is now? I am at chapter 76 now, and reading any further is making me cringe. I don't want to be rude or mean, but this is how I feel.

I really liked the first volume. I like the settings, and the plot. However, after that, everything suddenly changes. I got so confused. It was as if this book was given to an entirely different author. The style of the book, the dynamics, and the pace of the story all changed drastically. I feel like the people who like this book would need to be as flexible as the author in their taste in books. This seriously feels like 2 books that has been meshed together, and I'm not sure I like this very much. I'll try to get through it, but I'm not loving this so far. (I'm on chapter 70-ish)

I did not make it through. The MC is so stupid. I understand that it is because he is just a child, and it makes sense, but reading this just infuriates me. I am so pissed. The MC here is such a pushover, he is too naive for my taste. I hate stupid MCs who gets entangled in conspiracies, and only gets through it through sheer luck/plot armour. In my opinion, this story had a lot of potential, but my anger levels keep on rising as I read this. Now, I am not normally a person who would leave a review, but I just felt compelled to due to my build up of rage. Feel free to delete (if this cite allows you to) this if you want, but I just want you to know what I think. I think that this story had a lot of potential, and that the writer actually has a nice style, but I think that it is a bad move to make the MC so stupid and naive.That's all I have to say. Please don't let my review discourage you from writing. We have enough dropped stories on this cite as it is. I wish you all the best. Phew I feel so much better after writing this out... Thanks for putting up with my rant

We really don't see much MxM fanfics on this site. We need more of them. I have only read a few chapters, and I'm already quite liking this. Though, I don't think that's what narcissism really is. The impression I got from this story is that MC has a sky-high self-esteem, and is ignorant about his own flaws. However, to my knowledge, narcissism actually means that the MC should've had a very low self-esteem, but he buries it. Grandiose is just one of his ways of burying his insecurities. Aside from that, and the small amount of chapters, I think this novel is worth reading GIMME MOREEE

Y'know what would be interesting? If you write a story about the pizza delivery guy too 😂. Thanks for the chapter :D

Interesting concept. I like it. Thx for the chapter [FYI, it's not multiple personalities/identity, it's disassociative identity disorder (DID)]

Hey, I'm pretty interested in this book's concept, but it can get a little a little confusing if you don't separate spoken words with apostrophes (").... It would be great if you can fix that... Thxx ♥️♥️♥️☺️☺️

It might be the colon (:) you put before the (") bcuz idt it's supposed to be there... I don't see anything other than that. Keep up the good work ✨✨😃

Don't read it if u don't like it... 😒😒