Not only is the story fun and entertaining, but you can see the basis on which everything is going to develop, from how the "mental out" skill works, the relationships of the MC and the history of the world where everything is going to develop. , you can see the commitment and effort you put into the story, I look forward to more updates

F for basara basara toujou? , is thath a refernce ? of shinmai maou testament?

No se casi nada acerca de honkai (a excepcion de los videos que el mismo juego sube) para entender por completo el lore, pero gracias a ti autor-san he empezado a tomarle cariño a la historia y a los personajes por la forma en que los describes, asi que estando ya al corriente con el fic, no me queda de otra que decir , gran trabajo ^-^👍,espero las proximas actualizaciones con ansias

"That is 15 more years", omni-man would be proud, anyway thanks for the chapter and yadayaada ~~, take the break to rethink the ideas of the fic and not to stress

a bit bland but realistic the MC's wishes about going to RWBY, due to the punishment system, even if he could wish to be the closest thing to a god in that world he didn't know if the punishment would be of the same magnitude of desire and as the same god (karma I think it was) I mention if the balance of power is unbalanced, the world itself would be against you to regain balance

I like the way you implemented on the wishes and punishments depending on the actions that one take in his life, normally when someone does a says of this type (be it any series or medium) it is based only on wishes of the MC, saying things as "a is that for your good deeds" x "a wish will be granted to you, as if the human being were the purest thing, that's just one self-traction," no one is free from sin "someone said once, I will follow your fic and I will see how far this will go, regardless of whether I do not like the rhythm that you will take at the end I will still read it because of the premise of the first chapter that caught me, I see potential here friend