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thank you, I have received similar comments, all I can say is that this is my first time writing and first draft so some things might not make sense or might progress in unrealistic way, this will be smoothed out in second drafts etc. for now I will continue to write and fix those issues later! thanks so much for reading this much and being so invested in the story!
:-) I know you want more Resh and fewer interludes and that is totally cool, I really appreciate the feedback. The two will be melded together as the story progresses for sure. But for now, I need the interludes in for more of the world-building as Resh is a little immature to be able to understand the world. Not only that but Resh's senses are terrible so it cannot appreciate the world in a way that we can. Hope that helps!
No spoilers from me! But happy to hear speculation! :-)
Do you mean instead of pottered? If that's the case then when I said pottered here, it means that he was moving deliberately and methodically around his lab. It is an expression used more by British people I guess and not really by other cultures I think. Hope that clarifies.
not permanent it is a consequence of its evolution / species currently.