Disclaimer: I see a lot of disparaging comments about how the MC isn't cold and calculating and instead is a simp. If you're looking for some self insert virgin wet dream like a lot of edgy pre-teens on this site are, go somewhere else. Enough with the rant and on with the review Writing Quality: 4/5, fights are well detailed, and setting descriptions are gripping and easy to imagine leaving you totally immersed in the story. It's not perfect but is nearly there. Stability of Updates: 3/5, Author does a very good job of putting chapters down every day but I noticed some chapters were pretty short. Story Development: 5/5, Story development is good, there's direction, motives, mystery, and it flows pretty naturally. Character Design: 5/5, Characters feel entirely human, and while you may not see it from my viewpoint imagine how people would behave in their situation. I could see myself acting like that which imo makes me even more immersed. World background 10/5 Incredible, an original world which is totally unpredictable. Ridiculously crazy monsters that leave you feeling awed and curious. The idea of the flaw and aspect is perfect, and is immaculately written. Mysterious setting which makes you hungry to find out more. Overall I give it a 10/10, that's my personal opinion though read it yourself and find out!

I really just don't understand. I see these types of comments all the time that make it seem like people really just aren't even paying attention to the story. He had a previous misconception that she was a gentle and kindhearted person, and that was a big part of the reason why he was attracted to her. Now he is having a hard time accepting that she really isn't that kind of person he believed her to be for the last 3 years. Really not that hard to figure out if you have a brain.

This made me physically cringe

creepy mf sentence, also if you call him a simp youre also a creep

It's extremely clear to me that you're 13-14 years old

This could also be considered soul magic no?

Isn’t this soul magic which is forbidden? She just claimed that the Regis didn’t practice forbidden magic.

Ok well, let me list out classic symptoms of narcissism and compare them between the noble and the MC: 1. Expectations of being realized as superior to monsters. 2. Possessing a sense of entitlement to monsters. 3. Expectation that others should do special favors for you from monsters. 4. Belief that nobody should question your motives and should have unwavering compliance with your requests of monsters. 5. Taking advantage of monsters to move forward in life and/or to get what you want, with no remorse toward the ones you stepped on to get there 6. Arrogance, haughtiness to monsters. 7. Unemotional towards monsters. The only thing the MC does is hunt monsters but he still demonstrates remorse. Based on what i've seen, the noble checks most if not all of these boxes compared to the MC. Also, the noble isn't going to die, he bet his soul bond's life in a duel (which, by the way, checks one of the boxes) but he later found out that his soul bond is guaranteed to lose so he bought a soul bond for the sole purpose of killing it to guarantee the life of his other (better) soul bond.

Sorry that was poorly written. So the main problem is that the mc is mad at the noble for taking advantage of the eagle to move forward in life and/or to get what they want. This is narcissistic because the MC did the same thing. I believe differently because the key difference here is remorse, which the MC has demonstrated and the noble has not.

It's not necessarily narcissistic. It's like saying you hate animal cruelty then going to eat a burger. People hunt monsters for many valid reasons to do with survival, however this eagle is unnecessarily forced to die. In Jason's case he hunted monsters to further himself or his career. It's not like the characters love hunting monsters.