Emelyyn
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I think its the father ughhh horrible translation
Especially Mrs. Wang, she felt disconcerted. It occurred to her that she hadn't noticed earlier, her daughter was growing up to look just like her. Would people notice this in the future? If Chen Ming realized, would he stop loving his daughter? - Emelyyn6dCommented
Im tired of she he
Chen Afu can understand Mrs. Chen and Chen Ye's attitudes, all people are selfish. From Mrs. Wang's conversations in the past few days, he deduced that ever since Alu became lame, they had shown unkindness towards him and Dabao. - Emelyyn6dReplied to Emelyyn
Dont knw tf them talking about
Chen Afu was shocked again, realizing that not only was Mrs. Wang a child bride, but perhaps the man who might be her real father was raised as a stepson by Mrs. Wang herself. Mrs. Wang is now 36 years old, two years older than Chen Ming. This body was born when Mrs. Wang was 21. In ancient times, it was normal for a woman to have a child at fifteen or sixteen. Giving birth to a first child at the age of 21 was indeed old. - Emelyyn6dCommented
Horrible grammar
Chen Afu was shocked again, realizing that not only was Mrs. Wang a child bride, but perhaps the man who might be her real father was raised as a stepson by Mrs. Wang herself. Mrs. Wang is now 36 years old, two years older than Chen Ming. This body was born when Mrs. Wang was 21. In ancient times, it was normal for a woman to have a child at fifteen or sixteen. Giving birth to a first child at the age of 21 was indeed old. - Emelyyn6dCommented
Confusing af tf them talking about
As for that Mr. Chen... uh, he also has the last name Chen! He is probably the biological father of this body? Judging by the boy's implication, it's not a secret that Mrs. Wang served as Mr. Chen's child bride. - Emelyyn6dReplied to kichullie
Its a she right?
Once Mrs. Wang became part of the Chen family, she not only "revitalized" Chen Ming and worked diligently to earn money for his treatment, but seven months later she also gave premature birth to a daughter due to an accident. A few years later, she gave birth to a son. Although the daughter was mentally disabled, the son was clever and sensible. What a pity that he eventually became lame. - Emelyyn7dCommented
Fl is not their bio daughter 💯
Then came some whispers. Chen Afu only caught a couple of sentences, something about 'your wife taking the previous one's side.' Chen Ming tried to stop her from continuing, but he became so agitated that he started to cough. Only then did the old lady shut up. She added, "Don't worry, my boy, I haven't mentioned this to anyone, not even your elder brother. We've raised her for over ten years, I have a little affection for that foolish girl. But seeing Ayuan's condition.it hurts..." - Emelyyn7dCommented
HAHAHAHA
Alu chimed in, "Sister, you said so much and didn't even drool." - Emelyyn7dCommented
Fool buy food first!!!! House? Clothes? Land? Ughhh stupid asf
Moved by a thought, he shifted his chair with half a bowl of rice in his hand, inching closer to Li Xiu'e: "After we finish eating, I'll take you all to the jewelry store. I'll buy some beautiful accessories for you and our mothers to wear. We have money now, there's no need to continue depriving ourselves." - Emelyyn7dCommented
Creepy
The baby girl understood and laughed happily, her bright big eyes forming into a crescent moon shape, looking extremely adorable. - Emelyyn7dCommented
U cant even give baby plain water noww porridge she gonna be dead next second🙃
Li Xiu'e carefully picked up the child, and feeding her some porridge with a small spoon. - Emelyyn17dPosted
Questionable grammar and sentence structure, hard to read, and MC has horrible character ( shes being a villain for no reason like i dont get it why she is so desperate to torture Bai Hua¿ MC hate on her just bcs Bai Hua has the same face as her enemy in past life. Which is quite unfair for Bai Hua🤷🏼♀️). Mc personality is not stated clear enough i feel like her character keeps changing throughout the chapters. But no character development tho lol. I fell asleep while reading this. Considering I used to read novels with thousands of chapter.. i cant even stand reading 10 chapter of this novel. Not worth spending coins🙅🏼♀️ Tbh MC og name is quite mouthful too so kinda lost interest in her. The dialogues between characters is cringe too lol
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*this servant
"Third Miss! The servant is terribly sorry. Please spare the servant's low life; the servant begs Third Miss!" The maid was shocked as she hurried to kneel down in panic. It's over. The third miss is going to kill her. Her face was bloodless as she felt the death breath envelope her soul. - Emelyyn2mthCommented
*she
"Hiss!" She sucked a mouthful of the deep breath as sweat flowed down her face. But she didn't shout or say anything. I was just frowning while observing the girl in front of her. - Emelyyn2mthCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
- Emelyyn2mthCommented
Thanks for heads up😌 at least Im not gonna hate on characters at the beginning👏🏻
Author's Note: All characters in this story need time to develop. They are not perfect from the start. The FL's character is dull because of some reasons that will reveal later. Her actions towards everyone is thoughtful. She isn't witless and naive. And the Male Leads in this story are not scums. You should give it a try because I believe that you will understand everything later and it'll be acceptable to you when you learned their reasons behind their actions. The grammars form chapter 1 to 170+ are not good. I later learned to use grammarly recently around chapter 200+. I will come back and edit the old chapters when I'm free. - Emelyyn2mthReplied to Cherry_Pei
Yupp cliche plot
On the day of Jeslyn's graduation, a massive party was thrown in her name and weirdly enough, that was all she remembered before she found herself lying in a hospital bed in country A and realized later that she had been in a coma for 2 years and had selective amnesia, so everything that happened from the day of her graduation to the night before she woke up from coma were lost and nobody wanted to tell her about it.