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  • arun_karna
    arun_karna2yr
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    I am straight , so this didn't relate to me ............... but it is a good story. i liked the work.......................................................

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    The Alpha's Hidden Lover
    LGBT+ · DrAxy66
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  • arun_karna
    arun_karna2yr
    Posted

    Heck yah , you have grown a bit jazz. Now don't get me started with the grammar, you have to put the dialogues inside quotations (" "). why do you forgot them?.

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    I guess i do love you!!!
    Teen · jazzclover
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  • arun_karna
    arun_karna2yr
    Posted

    Had some parts were i can not understand , so hopefully you work on it. Other than that its a solid story. i am just trying to be honest here- no offence.

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    The heart of the marked
    History · KaNaOl
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  • arun_karna
    arun_karna2yr
    Commented

    talk about bad parenting,

    "I don't need a daughter nor a baby. I can't gain power with a baby like this, it will make the higher society and nobles laugh at me for this disgrace I bring upon them." In that moment the cards were turned and the question of the father side, was almost answered. The old mother stood up and placed the baby into a small basket, covered in warm fur and then approached the girl.
    altalt
    The heart of the marked
    History · KaNaOl
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  • arun_karna
    arun_karna2yr
    Posted

    hmh kind a funny , but the heroin seems like a strong person but the male lead is just suking up to her , which is not what i hoped for. lol apart from it ,its good .

    altalt
    love or a crush, you tell me
    Anime & Comics · jazzclover
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