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Can the Vampires not hear him? They have super hearing.
Bro is the biggest looser. Imagine getting isekai'd into Star Wars with hot naked Twi'leks and you still use your hand like a beta cuck
Why are you stroking yourself author? This writing is dumb.
are you telling me Peter doesn't know what Russian looks like? doesn't Cosmo have Soviet writing on her outfit?
of course you're a furry (disgusting)
why didn't he do this from the start? why let yourself get beat up and tossed around like that?
Ego can see the video... now he knows
This is a slow and garbage story written by a garbage author. What kind of author creates a plothole and then follows up with "yeah I know, sorry". My brother in Christ, YOU are the author. YOU control the plot. And yet you let Donzo live so your uncreative ass could bring him back later as some sort of antagonist. Yikes that's incredibly lame and cliche; shame on you for being this fucking boring and predictable.
Why? BEING him gives you his powers. Instead you've chosen to be a shittier version of him for...reasons? What you're saying makes no sense. If I had to chose between being inserted as the GEoM or a Custodies, well it's an easy fucking choice. Why wouldn't I chose to be a God?
That's not the game acting cute, this is you the author trying to act cute. And failing.
you don't need to wonder. the reason is because this is garbage writing :)
... the snakes think the 7 year old child is a potions master who's going to dissect them, rather than a child looking for a pet? Man sometimes I think you don't even bother proof reading or reviewing your work before you release it.
Why? Is he not an adult? Grow up dude, you're in the body of a child, of course people who don't know better will treat you like one. The MC is acting like an immature brat right now.
Why even write this? This is a Harry Potter story. He is going to Hogwarts. What a useless paragraph to write.
This is so stupid. You still have four more years until Hogwarts, are you going to be taking high school classes as a junior by then?
really? we're going to give her both the cows and the magic girls? for what, a behemoth. "Art of the Deal" goober
huh? so what can she do now?
The story is boring. I'm practically falling asleep here following this loser's life.
Why not just wish to BE the God-Emperor of Mankind then lol?
honestly I like exterminatus, it's a pretty good name.