i just love the savagery of it all.

you know when you expect something but it still surprises you .can't get the thought of Mia being the one to do it instead, feels novel

please do keep writing .after all the build up it'll be a shame to stop now .though it would suck if you stopped in the middle too

just don't Starve us too much will ya

so unexpected , amazing i want more

sweet I'm looking forward to it .i like that mage part ,feels unique without over doing anything.Kinda makes me wanna write my own book like this .But I know I Kinda suck right now

developing the dungeon and himself and finally get to scrapping with his hands .don't leave me with the idea of it alone and leaving the place .The starting characters need to have more impact on the story . Especially Muru ,give her a little more brains n power .let her take her role as his shield .The trader succubus can lead to interesting story lines also .if you gon leave any ,use them fully b4 it

just waiting for new chapters too

moonfox considering he thinks his G will like it .

no of the above in the quiz

more chapters please author i just hooked here . I need more

This book still running. i wait on you n your books . too in love with em

skirt chasing is cliché. I'll keep one FL for a long while then I can't think of anything to do with them to add interest in the story.

haven't thought about it yet. I'm improvising the whole book ,but probably in later chapters if u want . I only have one partner in mind so far

i will rewrite it tomorrow, was still looking for the errors in it.

Thank you I will on it starting today . As I said I'm pretty new to this so it'll take some time

reàlly a good boon I can't wait for more chapters keep writing .