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I would have loved to read more. I would have liked to see Chu Ning heal Yan Shen. I would have liked to see more interactions with her brothers. I liked how the heroine took care of the family members who needed her care. This is an enjoyable story that needs more chapters for a satisfactory outcome.

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It's sad to see this story come to an abrupt end. I liked the heroine and the storyline despite the need for proofreading . [img=update]

I like the storyline and progression of the characters. The only issue is the lack of proofreading. The misuse of words takes away from the story when I need to reread a sentence a couple of times to get what I think the author is saying.

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I am enjoying this story. The reason for the 2 star in writing quality is that the story would benefit from a good proofreader. I say this because though the story is strong, it does get confusing in how the character is referred. The characters are referred to as opposite the original stated sex. An example would be where Heleness is referred to as 'he/him' instead of 'she/her', which would be proper as the character is female. This is an issue throughout the story. I would strongly recommend a proofreader if this story were to be published in English. Guo Miao's development in the story is great. While from the start, Guo Miao's intent was to return to care for her father and brother, the other characters' progress is surprising to me. The world building in the story is great. It is developed in such a way that a westerner like me can understand. Any questions that I have as to why certain characters behave a certain way, I take as a difference in culture. I am looking forward to more adventures with Guo Miao. I hope to see Heleness more as the story continues.

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I am really enjoying this tale. Question: When are her brothers going to step in and help her? We know from previous chapters that they have eyes on the family, so I was expecting to see them take action. Especially when the 'dumb' brother was kidnapped. I want to see more of the brothers spoiling her, as the title proclaimed.

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This is a fun story. Unfortunately the updates have not been loading properly. Don't know if this has to do with the author or the platform. Hopefully, this will be addressed soon.

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