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kyeron_sweeney7dCommentedI'm positive they even mentioned she used to go round as an old dude -.-
Just like that, before everyone's eyes, Ophis' form shifted. She grew. Where before she looked quite young, she quickly came to look the opposite — stunningly mature. Her features were still recognizable as the young girl from before. Only now, she was all beautifully grown up. A proper Christmas Cake — with a voluptuous figure and a regal aura — if I had to label her as anything.- kyeron_sweeney18dReplied to Dragonfartrider
looks to much like the psycho rangers from power rangers imo
B) Make a new one - kyeron_sweeney19dCommented
I mean i remember when i was a kid i think hearing them talk i think it was in a film tho cant really remember i was pretty young tho but yeah talking could be cool just as long as its not often idm
Author desu: Would you guys okay if Jerry and Tom can talk? - kyeron_sweeney22dCommentedCh 454 Chapter 54
- kyeron_sweeney3mthCommentedCh 30 A New Life
- kyeron_sweeney5mthCommentedCh 57 shoutout <updated>
- kyeron_sweeney7mthCommented
dude it's the only book you post in the first place -.- complaining about support when you have only one book that not everyone will look at is dumb I enjoy the book myself but stopping for a reason like that when it seems you've not even been writing that long is dumb.
Ch 50 Stop - kyeron_sweeney9mthCommentedCh 7 Sorry, explanation and questions
- kyeron_sweeney10mthCommented
I'm just gonna say I'm really enjoying this the concept is fun and the story seems to be going places its a little slow but I like it
So a few things before I start the chapter. I got my ass handed to me in the two new reviews I got today, and both mentioned that my writing is difficult to read, and one of them said it needed to be put through google translate to even read. Is it really that bad? Another thing they both mentioned is that Haruko has no personality, and I'm curious if that sentiment is held by anybody else? Another note is once again people are upset that it feels too much like a slice of life, and I really don't know what else to say at this point. It is a slice of life…. I'm just flabbergasted that people are picking it up knowing that, and then getting upset when the story has a slower pace, and spends more time with interactions than anything else. I have many more positive reviews than negative, but the negative ones hit so much harder, and I don't even know if I should defend myself, or leave it alone? Anyway rant over. - kyeron_sweeney1yrCommented
ngl I just picture the redhead mj from the comics and I ain't changing that xD
She was wearing a beautiful slim black dress that hugged her curves in all the right places with her hair styled in soft waves. - kyeron_sweeney1yrCommentedCh 112 Please read again
- kyeron_sweeney1yrCommentedCh 28 Continuation!