sromjeng
of reading
7
Read books
man really said, "who needs therapy when i can abuse women instead" 😭😭
sir that is a halloween bouquet
yep, having every sentence end with an exclaimation point makes it look like the author is desperately trying to make the story look more exciting than it is. it's like if a rollercoaster started 100 meters up, but continued on a straight path with no dips or variety.
written incredibly simply, probably close to elementary level reading at the moment. the translation needs some help; calling the system "enslavement" left and right is very unpleasant to read. yes, they're animals, but going "yay! slavery!" read poorly no matter what. the protagonist himself doesn't seem particularly witty or interesting in any capacity, other than having some budding serial killer vibes. but in a super bland and edgy way, unfortunately.
man's really trying to say "i killed some bugs and then ordered a wasp to kill some more bugs, so the gore of killing a boar is fine! 😀" that truck really destroyed his empathy, huh
the simplicity of the writing is so painful but i cant look away
local man absolutely decimates ecosystem for power, just like in real life!
story where Steve Jobs transmigrates and recreates Apple to become rich to compensate!!?!?!!??
the best power fantasy trope is destroying the environment and causing everyone to perish from climate change a la "Our enemies will die if we just destroy the planet we live on!"
imagine having to rank up just to be able to wear a hardhat for armor
if humans as a whole are considered the brainiacs, then the rest of the world must be populated by jellyfish
i know that people want to get the show on the road and all, but the complete lack of depth in these descriptions is uh. bad kind of curious on if the untranslated version's prose is this poor or not
First impression is pretty bad with how every single sentence ends with "!" Somehow I'm already exhausted from how excited this person is just from a few paragraphs 😔 I would be very interested in this if the author decides to explore the poverty situation going on with the mages and the mage hierarchy system, which... is basically just asking for sociopolitical commentary in a standard power-trip fantasy, but I'm allowed a little optimism methinks