You had a good start on the story but it ends suddenly with a lot of questions in the readers minds. What did happen to Sansa...??!! What did happen to Marco..??!! Why did Carlos kidnap her? etc... I hope you can continue the story❤🙏

I think the author is very talented in showing the story characters' emotions by playing with words. Very nice descriptions with most effective details. 👌 👍 👏 ❤

She was the one who accepted this situation.

what a crazy scene, you turned me on😅

I don't get why she accepted to be his submissive.....????!!! What's the benefits for her....???!!!🤔🤔😳😳

I wish I could experience same story when I was 18 years old.

I wouldn't go there. Even though you were born there, when you have bad memories, it's useless to go.

Athena deserves both her parents together.👨‍👩‍👦❤

If we don’t act childish our inner child will die. it needs to be alive.👼❤😍😉

it's so sad that he can not express his feelings to her sister 😢. But I'm Glas he finally could talk to her🥰

My daughter's name is Athena too😍😍

Her wide blue eyes are suspicious 🤔🤔🤔 is it his baby....???!!!!!

what a tough situation to be pregnant and not dare to tell your partner 😳😔

I'm happy they are back home👍👌❤

A few years ago when an American shoot about 200 person in a stadium, no one said that all Americans are crazy but when the égyptien shoot in New York city, every was afraid of all middle eastern 😔😔

When a person from a country do crazy things doesn't mean that the whole people from that country are crazy...!!!

what a wonderful day tattoo + freedom 😍😍🥰🥰👌👍

I like bromance too👌👍❤

who would dare to drink that tea....????!!!😱😱😱

I would do same as Arius