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Who is Myra? Arlan’s mother? *theories* 🤔
Maybe she can fake an injury to find reason for a physician visit 🤔
Sidina is with the other group
Wouldn’t smoke from the fire father attention? It would rise over the rock they’re hiding behind 🤔
I swear if she falls asleep—
“Despite her age” LOL fear not, fellow readers. You may think that late 30’s is old but then you BLINK and you’ll be there too, wondering why others think you are old.
3 chapters.. sure but not at the expense of your health. Authors tend to burn out easier when pressured for more content. I think you should allow yourself the time to look over what you've worked on and see it in an objective light so as to make edits that help with your flow. I noticed that you tend to edit the beginning of each chapter from the last chapter's ending. It might be beneficial to you to take a break and go through everything before posting. ... unless the creative juices are running full-speed within you. In which case.. drive on, friend!
I don't understand why the family attendant would retrieve Xiaofei first before being directed to get Lin Feng... if they wanted to wait for direction from him anyway, then shouldn't they have retrieved him first as the subsequent family head? I know Xiaofei was favored by her grandfather, but that wouldn't have mattered when it comes to the literal living status of the current family head. I'd think both uncles would be well-involved before Xiaofei was ever told about the situation.