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“Split up with” would fit better here
Black plain protag?
Wait who laughed?
Some of your chapters are mixed up friend, around chapter 50 I’m completely lost in the timeline
I’m gonna throw out a guess so I can come back in however many chapter and see if I was right. The dude who was called “your highness” in one of the previous chapters that asked about Nina will end up abducting her for whatever reason so when Vicente gets back from his travels he will be powered up he will have to go against the royals.
Who will you give the apple to? Oh great Paris of Troy
I just realized that yue li and Liyue is the same name just slightly changed and it’s kinda funny
Y’all forgot to remove this
Maybe it’s integrated assistant instead of artificial intelligence
He still has the undead repelling whip
An old archmage has a stronger body than a dude who plants trees for a hobby? Does each rank up make your body stronger or is it just an increase in lifespan and Ronan’s hobby is squats bench and deadlifts
According to what the author said a couple of chapters back the intelligence stat doesn’t really work like that I think it’s potential intelligence instead of actual usable intelligence
Can he use .5 instead of a full point?
In her “shoes”
I think cleavage is already plural because it means breasts so writing cleavages is a little redundant
“Against” her soft skin
“Jason’s” face
“Jason” just narrowed
“Hand” to his face