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Horses117831yrCommentedCh 1 The Life of A Horse Named Cloud- Horses117831yrReplied to coolhorse202Ch 1 The Life of A Horse Named Cloud
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I've liked it so far I really like the names of the characters and I've found it fairly easy to follow the story line and understand what's going on while reading it. I really like horses so it's always cool to read books that have them as the main focus in a good way. I can't wait to read more! Thank you for all the chapters you've released thus far!
- Horses117831yrCommentedCh 11 Olivia and the Stones
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Well, if you ignore the four bullies personalities..... which are not beautiful what so ever.
In fact, their true forms were the definition of hot vampires and werewolves. Those who thought that vampires and werewolves were ugly will get rid of this mindset after setting eyes on these sets of beauties. - Horses117831yrCommented
Why don't those "witch's" just ignore Joana if her presence/existence bothers them so much? Hopefully they'll be given a good lesson and never bully anyone again.
"I wonder why the villagers didn't beat her pregnant mother to death. If they had done that then we wouldn't have to put up with a girl like her everyday~," - Horses117831yrCommentedCh 1 The Reality Of Her life
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Oh, no...! She's gonna be so embarrassed
She laughed, pulled the chair and sat down arrogantly. "Mr Sly or whatever you call yourself I don't care, actually I know the CEO and his name is Mr Fyn, he is my fiancee, so you better get going before he sees you on his chair. And let me tell you, he is not someone to play with." - Horses117831yrCommented
what if he's working for that bald guy and those rogues?
"Why here then? I don't mean to be rude or anything, I just love to meet new people and to know about them. We don't get many here. So…." He said nervously. - Horses117831yrCommented
maybe she's just in her head too much?
After placing my things in their right places, I got out of the house and unlocked my car. I need to check the garage after I come back. I stumbled into my car after tripping over literally nothing. Yeah I have those days where I can trip on anything, including air. - Horses117831yrCommented
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That came out creepier than I expected. - Horses117831yrCommented
I really like vampires too! I think they are the best supernatural creatures out there! I think it has great potential! I noticed you spelled heard as "Hurd" and there were a few other misspellings they're not to bother some for me though. so far it's pretty good, keep up the good work, and I think more chapters would be great!
Ch 1 Prologue - Horses117831yrReplied to LaraLama
and the other horses too!
"GET AWAY FROM MY HORSE!" She screamed before sinking her swords into the back of the creature. - Horses117831yrCommentedCh 6 His Attention
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I like this doctor he seems nice to Rein. So far I really like the book, keep up the good work!
'No wonder our King kept this young man by his side. He must have seen potential in him.' He nodded in praise of their King for having the foresight and discovering this diamond in the rough. - Horses117831yrCommented
I am a little confused here... From what I have read so far the story seems good. Grammar could be better, other then that I am looking forward to reading more of this book already.
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I don't know why but this made me laugh....
Whooshing whoo hoo