How rude is it to use the word "retard"? You want readers but you're treating that charachter so poorly, my heart goes out to him, and not to your main characther. Chi is heartless and too arrogant. She deserves a life of unhappiness talking about that poor guy like that.

I am too late, lol, but you could use adept

I love your story!! Thank you for writing it. I can't wait for more story to be released ♡♡♡