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hmmmmm well it was an interesting read. there are actions scenes at the beginning of the story already. quite intriguing to. need to figure out more about the main character though. its still early to say anything about him

the synopsis got my attention. I think that's a good start. The story is still at the beginning phase and really need more for me to determine where it will go. But so far, its good. Good luck author

Hey man, thank you for continuous reading. Intensity it's a choice the user needs to apply. It is like muscular tension if he does not apply and effort the intensity will be at the normal rate. In the future more things will be explained about the intensity and the effects that it got in one body.

Dude, thank you so much for the review. I really really appreciate it. It means a lot to me. Er, regarding the cons... For the first con well no much to do. But I do try my best... Can't afford an editor yet hahaha. Will pay attention to it more still. But for the second it will be explained in the story why the treasure are especial and can't be done any more. Hope you continue liking the story!

thank dude. will double check

thanks for the comments dude. I will need to get back on the corrections when I have more free time but I have already taken note of them. Really appreciate it

thank you let me double check

I am currently having someone illustrate the characters. Will note this one. thanks man

thanks dude for continuous reading and hope you like what is coming next.

thanks man. Appreciate all the comments by the way.

Hahaha thanks dude

haha thanks dude

yep there will be but not much

Glad you like it! Thanks for the support!!

Thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

Thank you so much!

A very interesting plot. I initially thought that it will be the unsual cliche but I was wrong. The narration is just right. Though I would appreciate a more through description of the world, to let me imagine it, the story is still something worth reading. give it a shot. good luck author!

After I saw the story, there are two things that caught my attention immediately. "Martial Arts" and "Tournament". These are things that I really look forward too. The story is still work in progress, but I kinda like how its going. Good luck author!