So, far I love the story, and the interesting aspect of it being revolved around science and not magic. The science is a little light most of the time, but the theme of it will be sure to grow as the novel progresses. I hope. The world background is a little less detailed than I wanted it to be. But that doesn't include the world-building. In the few places that the MC has gone to, I could visualize the scene pretty well. The thing that is lacking is the history of how society got to where it is. But, I am sure, again, that this will be solved in the upcoming chapters.