RisingWanabe
I like to quote myself... Shit that's kind of narcissistic, -RisingMCWanabe 11, 8, 2021
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what are you an agent for the mia secret service
most important item mii
oh no
real
Coding made him an outcast?
whyd you write it twice
I feel as though he is learning the programming language too quickly, I know its easier the more coding you've done and learned to learn new but Maybe some more coding lingo and terms so we understand what exactly he is playing with and how he's altering the world around him
grandad*
rhats his dad bro
I thought you had to whiop it to make it cry
no introduction from a god just a quick bang wahhh birth boom
okay i may have jumped the gun but that seemed your aim
describe it more, I know its tempting to just say oh yeah it was very cliche and use the readers previous knowledge as an excuse to rush a bit, but I think it is rewarding to describe everything in detail
lame
Ewww
I thibk will is becoming the villain
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