This story is already on FanFiction.net called meddling giant

I hate when characters mention something and then say their too lazy to explain it and everyone just accepts it.

Eternal flame from Harry Potter used as an energy source would be better.

Heroes don’t have to worry about their families dying out of no where because of villains constantly escaping. So maybe he’s going to reveal their secret identity so that both the villains go after them and the government labels them as criminals because of vigilantism.

He should have killed Robert. It would have caused chaos and chaos is a ladder. Against the diminished barantheon forces he would have won and the starks would be hard pressed to support them especially after the baby killing and him having the boltons in his back pocket. Perhaps only the vale would support the storm lands with dorne siding with lannisters and perhaps even the reach.

If you want to fix your grammar just ask chatgpt to fix any mistakes or make your sentences more clear and it will re write it for you in less than 30 seconds. Its perhaps one of the most useful tools for someone who wants to make their story’s more readable.

Love that he’ s not a simp and didn’ t just back down.

He would have instant won, if kuzan didn’t make the ocean freeze. ~(•_•)~ just sayin.

I’ll just say that i was excited there was finally a inspired inventor fic, and then you kinda ruined it by nerfing it. you practically just made Him an evergrowing tinker with how you’ve blackboxed his tech so no one else can copy his instructions. which is a bit of a downer when your doing a kingdom building fic.