Sky_eater
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Sky_eater2hReplied to MuddBecause there in now 2 factions in it, how he knows though is beyond me
Of course, don't get me wrong, I'm not looking to cooperate with the Pioneer Squad, just extending a personal invitation to you and Exiled Immortal."- Sky_eater3hReplied to juSTAbystandR
There are probably more starter villages in that world
Compared to the somewhat impoverished and backward Adra Village, newcomers to Calia were often struck with awe. - Sky_eater3hReplied to Crom_Darkstar
John
"Finally back. I need to turn in the quest quickly! I wonder how Johnny's doing, but since Johnny is so great, he should be fine, right?" - Sky_eater3hCommented
Actions have consequences.
But he never expected it to unfold like this. - Sky_eater4hCommentedFor a player like him who had been part of the closed beta, it was like adding wings to a tiger!
- Sky_eater5hReplied to The_Absolute_One
Thanks I’m glad someone gets it
"What does he have that we don't?" - Sky_eater8hCommented
It is the perfect length
A/N: I didn't plan for 2B's introduction to be so long :3 - Sky_eater8hCommented
Goudere is the best
But him... all YoRHa should know of Allen Walker's existence... if there is a human who should be idolized by YoRHa, it's him... - Sky_eater8hCommented
Years not grades
"Everyone, stay calm! The sixth and seventh graders will fight with me, and everyone else will evacuate immediately!" - Sky_eater20hReplied to LORD_INDRATH
Thanks
I would like to hear your thoughts on this book. Are you enjoying it so far? Also, is the quality of the writing readable? Are there any grammar mistakes or issues that are hindering your reading experience? Your feedback will not only assist me but also enhance your enjoyment of the story. If there are any aspects of the story that you're not fond of, please let me know so I can address them. Constructive criticism is valuable and will help me improve the story. I encourage you all to read a few more chapters, as I believe this story has a lot of potential and is quite engaging. Thank you for your time and feedback. - Sky_eater20hReplied to Zyanid_Warfare
Obviously
"I am Goyle Gregory! My Gregory family is also a pure-blood family! Malfoy, why are you shouting at me!?" - Sky_eater20hCommented
Expell
"Hmph! Once I expose you, I will ask Professor Dumbledore to fire you bastard!" - Sky_eater20hCommented
House not academy
On the side of Slytherin Academy, Draco looked at John who was surrounded by stars, filled with praise and admiration. - Sky_eater20hCommented
Order of Merlin 2nd class
Dean: Jonathan Bohan (UK Director of the International Federation of Magic, Level 2 Magician of the Order of Merlin) - Sky_eater20hCommented
Guards*
Harry and Ronald are like door gods. - Sky_eater21hCommented
There are some grammatical errors, but they are mostly semantics and technicalities. All things considered it is a interesting and enjoyable story so far.
I would like to hear your thoughts on this book. Are you enjoying it so far? Also, is the quality of the writing readable? Are there any grammar mistakes or issues that are hindering your reading experience? Your feedback will not only assist me but also enhance your enjoyment of the story. If there are any aspects of the story that you're not fond of, please let me know so I can address them. Constructive criticism is valuable and will help me improve the story. I encourage you all to read a few more chapters, as I believe this story has a lot of potential and is quite engaging. Thank you for your time and feedback. - Sky_eater21hCommented
No clue as to why she would have any eastern features considering her lineage.
Even when she was young, she now had an exquisite face that combined Chinese and Western styles, short black hair, and a pair of dark pupils that always shone with malice and disdain. - Sky_eater22hCommented
House not collage
Even Hermione didn't expect that she wanted to help the college win the college cup. She started previewing today's course content very early, hoping to add points to the college through excellent performance. - Sky_eater22hCommented
Day
Because Harry and Harry were so excited last night that they didn't fall asleep until it was dark, John was almost certain. - Sky_eater22hCommented
1 day at most
For some reason, the two seemed to have met on the Hogwarts train for the first time, and they had only known each other for only a few days until now.