If he’s lucky enough, just play the lottery, creating unlimited money will destabilize the economy and/or have the IRS breathing down your back. A ton of money comes with a paper trail and taxes. The Ancient probably feels the need to befriend Will, to gain his favor/trust, so that (If he can) when he grows stronger, he won’t betray her and, like, destroy the world. Will tried to kill TreeTree’s sister, of course TT wants to be his enemy now! He needs to plant a new tree. The trees can see him in the mirror realm, lol. This story is really funny, Kamehameha, lol! About create ID and Exit, if he can destroy whatever he wants in mirror world, and then everything be fine in home world, then he can’t affect the reality, only his placement in it. If he robbed a bank, ran off to somewhere secluded, then exited, his money should shatter too. He can only move himself; which would probably look like teleportation to a 3rd POV. Otherwise the tree would have still died. I just thought u should notice this plot hole. Of course, you can fix this by ‘upgrading’ his ability to affect the real world while in mirror, in later chapters. I also like how this isn’t focused on romance, I like the grind. Just keep grinding, just keep grinding, just keep grinding grinding grinding, what do we do we GRIND. No SIMPing over females, he can look (cuz he’s a young, healthy male) but no distractions by relationships. Only female relationships allowed is a Wholesome relationship with sweet ‘ol granny. <3 I really like this, and how he now has a mentor, the Ancient One herself!

Great SI-OC fic, whose Thor’s older sister and she wants to improve things. Not a Mary Sue and the story isn’t focused of mushy romance. We as readers are thrown back into Asgard’s past, before the golden city and get to see the OC rise in her power. We might also see cavemen and dinosaurs on Midgard, still hoping! Good World set up, pacing and grammar as well. A very interesting read indeed!

I believe, that once Hela passes the hammer down to sparky, she should get another divine weapon if the same caliber/metal/enchanted power, a weapon that suits her. Maybe a sword, or maybe a huge war fan like Tamari’s and the gunbai from Madara (check out Naruto) because of her soon coming fire goddess title. Fan the flames, green flames? Or even black flames. I liked how she duel wielded with the sword and hammer, so maybe 2 weapons. Fan and sword? Can wait to read more!

You know....Hel doesn’t sound like a bad place. If the dishonered don’t go there, and only ordinary people, then why is it so bad? Sick people and people of old age go there, that’s not evil tho. In the Naruto world, if you die of old age, you’re practically a god, so in a world of Warriors, it’s a sin to do nothing and be ordinary? Huh? That’s butt (not hating on you! Just saying), I don’t think Hela should fear it as a prison, but live her life and be extraordinary. And if she is ‘chosen’ then she should live it up there with ordinary people and heck, improve the underworld. Like, seriously, I was under the impression that Hel would be a bad place, where bad warriors/people went. But there’s so much fear around normal people, and I guess it’s fine if that’s their culture then being a warrior is a blessing and being normal is a sin but to our point of view (the readers) I just don’t think it sounds like a bad place. I get why she fears it, because the Hela The movie was imprisoned there and she doesn’t wanna be trapped for thousands of years, no matter how good or bad a place is, but you also make it sound like being chosen to rule an entire realm is an amazing thing except if it’s Hel... I don’t know why I am getting so protective over Hel, it feels like it’s getting the short stick. Anyways, I just hope you can see my point of view of my thoughts, no hate, I like the story so far. And I really do hope she gets into magic, like Loki.