Good book that draws you in. You can’t seem to stop read.

Sunny like I’ll never go in those tunnels no matter what. Fated is like you bet watch this.

True. Almost every novel no helmet. Also almost every novel gives me shot headshots. Does make you wonder why there not more helmets.

Saved by the bell. Or should I say storm.

Taking a guess now the mc killed caster.

This is the most confusing chapter so far it even feels like there’s a paragraphs or 2 missing.

are there Available spot in the hunting part?

It wasn’t the mc(main character) that was the eldar commander.

What is the copper thing we were literally using crowns then it switched to copper like is a crown worth 1 copper.????????

And the sadness of a Witcher begins.

I guess this is one of those moments where it’ like since you already know all about these people it gave him a ton of information. Or is the skill that op.

What does the Raws mean??

It possible to do all that with Star Wars tech you just need to get the tech from other era like how you summon people from the old republic time becuase if you went far enough back I beleive there shield similar to sparatan shield just that they were put on droids due to energy consumption or something. ( I know this won’t help now but better later than never).

The last two sentences messed up the flow for me. The double and in the last two sentences to be exact. And the wake up thing seem forced.

But what if that the point I didn’t even know she became a princess at 13. It could be one of those things you see in the movie and not know about it unless you look into it. So if he a common fan and doesn’t look to far into things then the character is perfect. Like if he shows up later and she not even a princess it works but if she already queen. I’ll agree with you that it hurting the story.

When did Mu become blue and white it says he black at the beginning. I’m like 97% sure it says he black.

It literally said the freedom whatever broke the balance and not him.

I know right. Most books are just have the MC have a 3 paragraph discussion in thier head by rather it worth or not. this guy slaps his self and remembers he has ton more of the powder and just goes robbing some more.

Oh no

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