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Tomi_S_37401yrCommentedas an author you also may want to check what an iceberg theory is and why not to insert random pointles author notes in the middle of a chapter
[A/N: Or rather, as an author of a fanfiction, I don't want to delve into some parts of the lore that I can't really research or explain. I hope the running and coming game series give us some proper answers in the future.]- Tomi_S_37402yrReplied to Jdnufhsbsb
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because f**king author dosent explain it properli, from context = fairy says that black dots on map mean enemy player so i guess the show up when you fight and the change from neutral to black, but that is super weird since id doesnt show monsters and such
"Scatter! We'll regroup a hundred meters west of here. Use your map to observe the enemy's movements in case you cannot make it there safely." - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
you can tell that author has no imagination when you have a real word like game but game mechanics are soo old, why would a scrach count as full hit, even simple games today ofthen have glancing blows mechanics, how much of a simpleton you have to be to write stuff like that
When Stonecleave, now back on his feet, saw Jack barreling towards him, he quickly put away the potion he was just about to drink. Unwilling to get rammed again, he jumped sideways. But Jack anticipated his move and stormed in with his three circling slashes. Stonecleave dodged the first slash, parried the second, and was grazed by the third. The system judged the graze as a valid hit, so Stonecleave still lost life. His HP was under half now. - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
what not valid attack??? they got hurt from hiting ground and walls and from monster unnarm attacks and body slams but now if you not hit with weapon its not valid? why????? it stil hurts, can you not kick someone to deatch??? will they not bleed? Author could think a little before writing this shit
In that instant, Jack, using momentum from the twist, swept his leg towards her. She blocked the kick using her hand but was thrown several meters away. The kick didn't produce any damage as the system didn't judge it a valid attack, but it still caused pain and forcefully interrupted Red's attack rhythm. - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
on one hand fairy stays in character on the other is talking about player mechanics, its so stupid that it hurts my brain
"Are you going to send a message to those two friends of yours? If so, better to do it through party chat, this way, both of them can receive it at the same time." - Tomi_S_37402yrReplied to Nitrigo
soo deep
"I was just lucky," Jack said. - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
so basicly transporting to the game wasent random, it favored people ina a guiled
Now the whole clearing was filled up with people. They counted more than sixty people standing behind Silverwing's group. These new arrivals outnumbered them by more than two to one. Onlookers who saw this from the distance were all wondering what was happening. Why was such a large crowd gathering there? - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
i have a hard time accepting that people turn in bandits in a span of a month and are willing to risked their live for very little gain and they dont even know if anything gona be wort something or what will happend at the end of the trail. all of it is so mindless
"Damn right we have! They have interfered and ruined our business. We were originally waiting for more of our members to gather, but, as we saw Brother Scarface make a move, I thought we might come over to give a hand." - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
they are very eager to risk their lives for nothing
The man with the scar looked at Jack with an interested expression. "This is intriguing," he said. "But it's all the same regardless. Those who cross Death Associates will not be tolerated." - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
it is still bullshit, how many players from the same guild could be in a city? and how many people are normaly in a city, they would still be like a drop in the ocean. About 1000 make it to the end of trial and mc hardly meet anyone so how much people were transported? 5000? 10000? max
Jack was amazed. People had been pulled into this game world randomly but this guy could still find many of his guild mates here. But after he thought about it, he thought it made some sense. Everyone in the city was assembling at this place and Death Associates was a large guild in the city. So it's not such a strange thing to find many of their members here. - Tomi_S_37402yrReplied to Xamar
author is an idiot, too bad ehh...
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how the f**k she knows game mechanics and why she calls them players. she was using only in world terms before and saying its not the game but now they are players for f**k sake
"Yep, now that there are other players in your vicinity, there should be another page in your status window," Peniel explained. - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
yep
"You…!" Bigarm was furious. He was not only being made fun of, he was also being looked down on. Usually, it was him who did that to others. He would not bear this humiliation. - Tomi_S_37402yrCommented
good thing he did not waste fairy and asked her everything while hunting...
'That was a skillful throw,' Jack thought. 'Is it a ranger's skill as well or was the guy that good?' He needed to ask Peniel later. He was familiar with Fighter's and Magician's skills, but his understanding of the Ranger class was mostly presumption. In case he had to fight with that class again, he thought he'd better find out what they were capable of. - Tomi_S_37402yrReplied to zaboc
well its a cheap way of making mc look good, but i think it is also inherited from chinese novels, not to sound too much rasist but if its chinese it has to have rape you can only hope that mc is not the one doing it
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no great men here
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in the moste cliche way possible
Chapter 34. Three men and a girl