Porkster_Terry
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Their is not much direction in the story. The Plotline feels very scattered. The story otherwise seems very nice, but i would just love for the chapters to be bit more interrelated & for the story to have a bit more of a direction.
Same chapter....
What I think best is, him getting this information & then taking the dues. Even better would be threatening stark indirectly & forcing Ned's hands to take action or cancelling the engagement or lot of other things like making life difficult for Tullys
Did you not in the beginning say that students start Hogwarts at 14 & all main characters are 18 right now?