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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_18mth
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    som demons DEMONS they shouldn't care about the taboo, I mean that's why only humans care, don't you dare change their relationship with Ravel, what has been bothering them in these chapters is the situation and the attitude they have towards Sirzech and rias, I mean, it is assumed that part of the nature of the original riser remained in the body and influences the mc and that is why there is the situation with rias, therefore, that demonic nature should not also make him not have so many problems regarding having a relationship with your sister? The rest is good, the story is good, good work, author.

    Ch 119 Snowflake
    Riser Phenex isn't a villain
    Anime & Comics · akikan40
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_19mth
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    I just found the story and I'm loving it, I have to say that now I'm very intrigued by the relationship between fleur and harry, it's been a while since I found something to read about the Harry Potter fandom and I was thinking of going back to other stories but I found this and it didn't take me more than an hour and a half to reach it, I must say good job and I hope you don't stop the story.

    Ch 30 Chapter 28: The Headmaster's Goal
    The Secret Society (Harry Potter AU)
    Book&Literature · Markus_Ellis
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_111mth
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    ok the black keys are not that bad, i mean sieven against the fallen and demons. On the other hand, it's good that she learns to make sweets at some point, she's going to meet Ophis, so a little sweets and she could get along with her and then the rest of the beings would have to be careful how they treat the mc

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Curse of G
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_111mth
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    I guess I shouldn't be surprised that he kills Issei, I mean the reward was pretty good if we don't take into account Draig's soul and the problems that being the red dragon emperor entails but honestly the class problem doesn't seem "logical" to me but In short, I only see 2 possible uses for the empowered team, I could make an exchange or with Azazel or the demons to solve the problem of the corpses or give it to one of his summons. the story so far is going pretty well keep it up author

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: Ending at the Prologue
    Necromantic Gamer's Journey(DxD)
    Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_11yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the cap, I see that you already use the mana as a sonar, which is quite good because in some works they forget about that utility, but I have a question by circulating the mana through your body, wouldn't you also get an increase in your strength? And if you focus it on a sense or organ like the eyes, wouldn't it increase its effectiveness? It's just a thought/suggestion in case the author wants to take it but I'm liking the story pretty well so far

    Ch 6 6: Training with mana
    Marvel: I am The Gamer
    Anime & Comics · ShadowDeity
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_11yr
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    I suppose that whoever was in the cave was destiny and from what she understood, together with the primordial of space, they are the ones who are controlling everything behind the scenes, but why it remains unknown, everything happened too fast. I hope that in the following chapters everything will be explained

    Ch 110 Accursed Fate
    DxD: Golden Peerage
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_11yr
    Replied to Photosphere

    ah ok, so I can't wait to read the reactions of the rest of the characters when they see grayfia

    Ch 29 A Foreign World
    DxD: Golden Peerage
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_11yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, the story is pretty good so far and I hope to see how it progresses but if I remember, time in the world of dxd stops then grayfia and the mc appeared even in the middle of the civil war of the devils, so no Would it take some time until akeno appears? Or do you plan on time-jumping to canon?

    Ch 29 A Foreign World
    DxD: Golden Peerage
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_11yr
    Commented

    I'm loving the story, good job author. 👍 Do you think it will take time for the mc to reveal the truth on Wednesday?

    Ch 13 Sire
    The Vampire and The Addams
    TV · hunterxxhunter2011
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_12yr
    Commented

    thanks for the cap and welcome, I hope to see how it progresses but I have a question related to the other stories, will you update them again or will you just continue with this one?

    Ch 1 C1 Beginnings
    I'm Batman (HP Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_12yr
    Commented

    It's a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter, although the mistakes Harry made are annoying because he is supposed to be a war veteran and the older Harry's personality is the dominant one, I can see them as logical and accept them with resignation, (also keep in mind that it's not the same world and Harry doesn't seem to fully accept this (at least in terms of power, as you can see by the arrogance he carries) another point is dark magic doesn't reach him to use "a lot" which I see as a mistake, and the fight scenes are too long although it doesn't bother me much after a while if it gets a bit boring but the story is very good 10/10 keep it up 👍

    Ch 28 Chapter 28
    A Strange Old World (HP Fanfic)
    Book&Literature · Robs511
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_12yr
    Commented

    I want revenge, in the future it will be poetic to see how he ends up with Heracles and gives Hera a lesson but very good chap

    Ch 49 Chapter 49
    The Mortal God of Olympus
    Book&Literature · Robs511
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_12yr
    Commented

    both since Ajuka created the diablo.net which is like a google and is where they see the games between the nobles, but mostly they communicate with communication circles since it seems easier to them

    Ch 18 The second queen
    Son of Ajuka(DxD fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Sawfly_Varte
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Commented

    me encanto este capitulo

    Ch 361 Capítulo 358: Tu nombre es (1)
    Origen [Español]
    Anime & Comics · GenoXX
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Commented

    tambien me gustaria ver adentro del harem a tsnade y konan

    Ch 114 Destined to be alone forever
    Strongest Talent in Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Skykritze
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Commented

    me encantaria ver la cara que ponen los soldados cuando vean al "rango f " jajajaj gracias por el cap

    Ch 356 Capítulo 353: [Calamidad] (5)
    Origen [Español]
    Anime & Comics · GenoXX
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Replied to R3vfor

    entonces podias hacer que en la tienda del sistema compre una linea de sangre le daria un impulso de poder y el fisico que necesita

    Ch 17 Yo;;
    Otherworld Pervert in DXD
    Anime & Comics · Evil_Peppa
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Commented

    maldicion esta muy buena la historia gran capitulo

    Ch 110 Akira and Tsunade join hands
    Strongest Talent in Naruto
    Anime & Comics · Skykritze
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Commented

    me encanta el personaje de shio ojala la pueda reclutar es como una hermana pequeña

    Ch 335 Capítulo 332: Encrucijada
    Origen [Español]
    Anime & Comics · GenoXX
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  • dantalian_1
    dantalian_13yr
    Commented

    gracias por el capitulo

    Ch 25 Chapter 25
    Dropped#52792
    Others · imaginefragments
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