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KateHill3yrCommentedThis is absolutely amazing! I love all the characters and I'm really interested in seeing what happens next. I love the cover art! I'm still relatively new to Webnovel and I'm still not really sure how to gain fastpasses but I'll come back and continue this as soon as I figure that out :)
Ch 53 Thousand Year Frost-poison (Jk)- KateHill3yrCommentedCh 23 Royal Academy
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Did you mean resignation?
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I think it should be previous incarnation because she wasn't reincarnated in her previous life.
Based on your previous reincarnation, a random system has been given to you, as is the will of all gods. All contestants have received a random System based on their previous reincarnation personality. - KateHill3yrCommented
Did you mean inevitably?
I sat in what felt like goo in a cramped spot for months now... I knew where I was. I was located in some woman's womb that will be my new mother. I am sure for obvious reasons, and I patiently waited for months with nothing to do but meditate. I picked up on this habit when I was a Mob boss to make sure I didn't make rash decisions when I was pissed. Some lackey would enviably screw the fuck up, and I would have to do clean up or order a dozen more people to do it correctly, and trying to do that while not in a clear mind is a recipe for more fuck ups. - KateHill3yrCommented
I think that this paragraph could be rephrased because I think you're lacking some punctuation near the end.
"That is interesting. Let me look at her file." A book came flying through the air after a moment from between the shelves from far down where my eye couldn't see and landed swiftly into his hand. "So died just today and from several gunshots to the body and eighteen more in the head. Family life no spouse, no children parents estranged after high school doesn't even know where she is or what life she lived Mob boss is what her job title says."