webnovel
avatar
0
whatwhatintheworld

whatwhatintheworld

Lv15
2021-03-14 JoinedUnited States
773h

of reading

187

Read books

Badges

13

Moments

61
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld8mth
    Commented

    Ee

    "Thank you for your kind words." Was all that Friya managed to think of that didn't sound like a pick up line.
    altalt
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld8mth
    Commented

    It seems like this chapter had a lot of mistakes

    Ch 93 The Hunt [1]
    altalt
    Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
    Fantasy · Animosity
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld8mth
    Commented

    He read a book as an infant?

    However, for a few months, he had no idea what his body wanted from him. Or at least that was the case until he picked up his first book.
    altalt
    Limitless Evolution: The Path To Immortality
    Fantasy · Animosity
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Replied to whatwhatintheworld

    Yuri*

    Ch 58 [Bonus chapter] Cambyses's Rights
    altalt
    Herald of Steel
    War · FerriticMatrix
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented

    Does this novel have thru :/

    Ch 58 [Bonus chapter] Cambyses's Rights
    altalt
    Herald of Steel
    War · FerriticMatrix
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Replied to NoWoRRyMaN

    this is stupid

    altalt
    The Witch Hunter System
    Fantasy · Pointbreak
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented

    kinda cringey

    Miyuki was the last to enter and sat in the last empty seat; By coincidence, it was right next to Ben. "Hello again, Benjamin-san," Miyuki greeted with a warm smile.
    altalt
    My Pick Up Artist System
    Urban · SamsaraWithWords
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented

    đŸ˜€đŸ˜€đŸ˜€đŸ˜€

    His shoes were similar to black Air Force 1's, giving him a slightly dangerous vibe. And to finish off the outfit was a simple gold chain around his neck. By the urging of the attendant, Damien also had a silver cross-shaped piercing hanging from his ear.
    altalt
    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented

    agreed, seems out-of-place based on paragraph above

    The fact that I already had an idea of what was going on. 
    altalt
    The Author's POV
    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented

    aaron?

    Cutting out the money for the horse that we borrowed and the mission hall fee, I will have about thirty dynes if I find nothing else after these. Quite a sum for my first mission. I thought I would manage even less, but four hours to get that much money made me quite satisfied, though I knew this was no way near the capital I would need in the future. One thing at a time, Aaron, I told myself.
    altalt
    The Novel's Sidekick
    Eastern · SILENTKILLER
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented
    Flower Boy
    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld1yr
    Commented

    what does this even mean?

    [This is the world I created with all my savings.]
    altalt
    Author Got an SSS Class to Fight His Own MC
    Fantasy · Herolich
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Commented

    feel better!

    Ch 307 Using the opponent's advantage against them
    altalt
    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Commented

    I really liked the chapter!!! I'm a bit confused on his bloodline name. is it twilight fey wolf or just fey wolf. or does he have both? like was the 25% essence for twilight wolf and fey wolf or just fey? and does he have still have night wolf in him and its just at 0% and not at all?

    Ch 785 Mythical
    altalt
    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Commented

    i wonder if Emery/Morgana turn into sköll/hati

    Ch 776 Bloodline Gene
    altalt
    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Commented

    I mean hes not wrong. don't know what emery expected lol

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    altalt
    Earth's Greatest Magus
    Fantasy · Avan
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Posted

    For referenece, im currently on chapter 89 out of 730ish. I feel like I've read enough to get the general vibe of the novel. So far, I have a lot of mixed feelings about this novel. I'm going to list my pro's and con's and if I don't drop this I'll come back and update this review. Pros: - Unlike other system novels, the system doesn't baby the protagonist. He has to figure thing out himself for the most part, which is refreshing. - The bloodline powers are really unique so far and I really like how his initial power was upgraded to something useful but not incredibly op. Hopefully the power scaling for him isn't to crazy and he doesnt bulldoze through everything later on. Cons: - Everyone from his parents to his classmates are cartoonishly evil. It seems like 90% of the characters in this novel are there so protag has a reason to act edgy and think the worlds against him. For example, I can understand his younger brother acting like a brat and cursing him at every moment because hes a child but his mother doing the same makes no sense in my opinion. If author wanted a "cold/abusive" parent making them treat protag like air/ being extremely distant would make more sense. Instead his mother also reads like an annoying brat despite being an adult...Same thing with school mates. It would have been more believable if only the main 3 bullies in the beginning were after him and everyone else was just distant and cold. - The protag is way to edgy are certain points. For example, I have no idea why he treats FL horribly from the moment they meet. Its not like they have a bad history, he just seems to hate her for no real reason. I couldn't understand why he slams the door in her face on there second or third meeting...You think since everyone else is so aggressively mean to him he would appreciate who ever is nice to him. Author says its for characters development but an explanation on why hes so edgy in these types of situations is needed for this to even be remotely believable.

    altalt
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Replied to Sovereign_Zro

    he seems to be edgy for no real reason :/

    'Tch, what does he want?' Gustav was irritated by being called out like that and being referred to as Oslov.
    altalt
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Commented

    was it ever explained why class 3 was choosen? instead of a different class...

    Only mixed-bloods from class 3 attended this exchange event. Most of these mixed-bloods only cared about how to increase their strength and were hardly concerned with studying.
    altalt
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
    detail
  • whatwhatintheworld
    whatwhatintheworld2yr
    Commented
    Sometimes the soothing feeling would be so good that Gustav would have the urge to moan but he would hold it in.
    altalt
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
    detail