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I do not know what the author smoked, but give it to me too. in general, the story is so-so for a number of reasons, gg is stupid and does not think about the consequences of his own and subordinates, he does not know how to manage staff, earn money for the sake of earning money, but only through a chest, but he can acquire things through the system and sell them, even if the price is too high and what? the characters also revolve around gg as NPCs dummies without a sense of mind, stupid in general.The system is also too weak for sealing spiritual power outside the store, although the author says that only forces operate in the store itself. I would put 3.5 for the story and then only with a stretch. and yes, gg does not know how to get women. the interaction of the characters is also low, a few words here, there are no thoughts of girls, etc.
What's wrong? the author professes Islam so no demons.plus, the fact that fan fiction writers constantly use devils with siski as a starting point, and here is a fresh look from the other side.also, the author does not talk about what powers he will have, which in turn gives a mysterious story. even the intensity of passions and a little bit of frivolity are kept
The author has a lot of ideas but little tolerance for his works, he has already abandoned several of his good works without finishing them. He also offers to join the patreon to unfinished works and what is the benefit , you ask ...There is no benefit for you only the author. The background of the world is weak, writes about the crisis of the world, but does not describe it in general, a complete zero. The development of the plot is terrible in the sense that you read several views from the outside. And the hero of the work does not develop, is not described, his character, his ideals, his views on the world are not there. In addition, the author does not perceive criticism, he clearly does not give a fuck to the reader, give him stones of strength and your many.
there is an opinion that the author of this fan fiction is dead. which, to be honest, is not far from the truth, due to the fact that with its appearance, the quality of the chapters as its constituent and its plot is completely different from what it was a few months ago. bottom line: the beginning is good, new updates are shit. maotiv to cut down more money on the old author and his work while there is a hype. the author of the account was stolen by a hacker?!
Дегенерейшин мазахишин нтр блядство мозга вынос хуйня автор дегенерат не читайте понос случится блевать охотно чем читать оценка явно завысил так что не гробте себя