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Art_Otzenberger52minCommentedYou keep calling the Master, Uncle master but keep using the feminine pronoun. Please fix this, it’s so confusing !!!!!
"Then I can rest assured." The gentle female cultivator gave a faint smile, and the faint scent of flowers on her body became stronger.- Art_Otzenberger19hCommented
Your continuity of story line is trash. Of course she saw him play. He played all of the songs he wrote for her and she originally practiced first with him.
At this moment, Ye Yuwan, who was in the audience, was stunned and tense; she had never seen Jiang Chen play the piano and couldn't help but worry as she grasped Jiang Chen's hand, "Jiang Chen, don't listen to her, you don't have to go up." - Art_Otzenberger22hCommentedCh 204 Blessing of Fire!
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That’s not what you originally wrote as the deal between him and his grandfather .
"Originally I should have helped you," Jiang Chen frowned, speaking in a solemn tone, "but this company was established with a private fund of one hundred billion given by my cheap grandfather. I promised him that I would grow it to a scale of a trillion within three years, so I cannot just invest in anyone whimsically." - Art_Otzenberger2dCommented
She has to be mentally deficient. That’s the only explanation. (I’d use the R word but someone might get upset).
Ye Jingyi became even angrier when Jiang Chen mentioned treating the illness again, glaring at him furiously, "Jiang Chen, stop making a fuss! Don't add to the chaos anymore!" - Art_Otzenberger19dCommentedCh 609 Dungeon
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… remember this “poem”, not prom.
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙌🏻
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Since when are their two 9 of Diamonds in a deck?
On the fourth card, Ye Feng had an 8 of Clubs, while the man in the tuxedo had a 9 of Diamonds. He maintained his advantage. - Art_Otzenberger1mthCommentedCh 188 Familiar situation
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No items from a BOSS. How disappointing .
The rewards were indeed generous, a whopping 300000 experience points, more than tenfold of the previous BOSS's. - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
Bane?
Bernard spoke up. - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
Wasn’t the name of his mentor Bane?
said Mentor Bernard. - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
Each trainee was recognized …. Please keep your subjects and verbs the correct plurality. Each, by its very definition is singular, so trainee and the verb were should both be single
Each trainees were recognized and rewarded based on the merit of their contributions during the escape. - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
Datas isn’t the correct term here. Datum is the singular form of data. Data itself is already a plural form of the word. Adding an “s” isn’t correct.
After a few seconds, Atticus selected two different datas at the same time. Immediately, the platform emitted a bright glow, and Liquid Metal emerged from the bottom, coalescing and twisting until it formed two robots. - Art_Otzenberger3mthReplied to Mystr
Yes, because they reset at Level 2.
- Fire: 1.1% - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
Your double use of cascade in the first sentence is confusing . A better structure would have been something like” flowed like a cascade…”
Her vibrant locks cascade like a cascade of flames, framing her delicate features. Despite her tender age, her presence commands notice. Standing at a height just shy of four feet, she exudes a youthful charm that is as enchanting as it is endearing. - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
The pontiff , not the sage.
But they did not know that Sage Merlin was under hypnosis all along! - Art_Otzenberger3mthCommented
Please, for the love of God!!!! Stop using that term!!!!!! It’s like having to listen to someone who uses “literally” in everything they say!
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