Very Good. . . . . .

A bit good...... . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . x. .x. . . . . . .. .

The first is not too bad, the grammar is good, I didn't find any mistakes, so far this is only the first chapter, hope you continue and don't drop.

So it's true, I just recently watch Unang hirit on FB and I saw you. Anyway, I'm just commenting here. But are you really Filipino and you earned 10 million? I'm Filipino btw.

Just search FairyTail Passive it is in my second account

Then read my other work it's currently on 63 chapter fairytail Passive Invincibility

And what do you mean not going to end?? .. 🤔

I'm novice at writing so plss can you tell my what is force means and kindly explain why mc become garbage?...

Yep

Yeah thats mine this my second account Because I need to re-edit the whole story