Another excellent start form you so I'm really excited to read this one too. I hope this does not mean the rest of your works would be dropped because I am keeping up with them too

Honestly, the starting was a little iffy but by the time 4 chapter comes around it's gotten so interesting that I'm actually looking forward to more of such goodness to come

Yeah, it's not going to go over well. Someone get the idiot under control

I really like this

I really like the dynamic they both have and I really adore the overall story. Please give us more of this as soon as you can update and I would be so happy to devour it all

Really good writing and really entertaining story till now. Now if only this had more chapters added to it then it would be great too. I'll add this to my collection for the time being and see where you take it further to

I feel that the fire and orphanage are important factors since they seemed to be repeated here

Seems really interesting so far. I hope to see how you will develop it. Also, good lunch with the WPC that you entered. I'll add this for now and keep an eye on the development in a few days

this is an innovative and new concept in the fantasy that is filled with power fantasy and it is really refreshing to see getting written. Also, this is genuinely interesting in these first few chapters so far