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Jamie_Walker_7763

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2021-03-13 JoinedGlobal
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
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    I am trying really hard to like this book but it’s not easy. I like the idea of the story and really want to like it as an avid reader but, it’s not written very well. The more I read, the harder it is for me to convince myself to continue to see how it turns out. There is way too much that doesn’t sound natural and also phrases that are repeated too many tImes.

    Ch 83 Swallowing His Pride
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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    I hate that family. All of them.

    Ch 44 Tempting Wealth
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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    I hate her mother and her father is worthless. At least her sister seems to be turning her attitude around after Lucas has been nice to her.

    Ch 43 Give Me A Chance
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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    Oh I can’t wait to see where this goes!

    Ch 36 Auction Venue
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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
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    Ch 33 Take Her Away
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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
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    I can’t wait for them all to find out who Lucas really is. I want to see them beg for forgiveness.

    Ch 18 Herculean Task
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    The Formidable Son-In-Law: The Charismatic Lucas Gray
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    You Need to talk to him

    Maintaining the illusion that she didn't know the truth was vital at this point. She still hadn't decided what to do when he came back. Whether to pretend she knew nothing or confront him about everything.
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
    Urban · Mcllorycat
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    You deserve everything that’s coming to you.

    Roberto's entire being was filled with regret. What had he done? What on earth had he done trying to provoke the devil?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    What did you say about Hazel? Anything that happens to you is your own stupid fault!

    Fantastic. As if he could focus well enough to sell himself at a time like this. Why had his life become this messed up?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    This is what you get for not actually caring and agreeing to that idiots terms.

    In a way that was even worse because he probably didn't even think he was doing anything wrong. John already regretted agreeing to the deal. He didn't want to be stuck sitting on this information without being able to go to the cops.
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    So I am expecting to see John, Roberto, and Artie all killed over this. Roberto is going to get them all killed.

    Whatever the case, Roberto finally had his blackmail material. For safety purposes, he should probably tell that Abramson guy who was looking for information on Billy Thornton about his illegal activities.
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    Did he even have the right to disrupt her life any further? Whether or not her husband was Billy Thornton, he hadn't done anything to hurt her as far as he could tell. She was happy with him. Could he really take the only family she had left away from her in good conscience even if he was dangerous?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    Yes when it comes to Hazel.

    Someone cut from the same cloth as him wouldn't be capable of loving another person the way Will Sheffield appeared to love his wife. Was it possible that everyone he had talked to about Billy Thornton had somehow gotten him wrong?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    You finally get it.

    You would have to be a complete idiot not to see how much those two loved each other. The improbable thought briefly crossed his mind that perhaps Billy Thornton hadn't wanted to kill Hazel at all and would have said anything to get his father to leave her alone.
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    Because he was a 7 year old kid and it was the only way to convince his psycho father not to kill her.

    A few things about this seemed to fit together but there was the most glaringly obvious hole in his wild speculations. Charles Thornton was absolutely convinced his son had wanted to kill Hazel. So why on earth would he marry her instead?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    Just stop and leave her alone.

    Will was a nickname for William. So was Billy. The chance seemed incredibly slim but was it possible that Billy Thornton had started using his mother's maiden name after he escaped from the mental hospital?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
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    But it continued to nag him as they talked. To tell or not to tell?
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
    Commented

    Please leave her alone

    Nathan said his old neighbor had gotten married in Las Vegas over the summer and the trail went cold until she resurfaced a few weeks later submitting name change paperwork in some city in Utah. It had to be her!
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
    Commented

    Just leave it alone

    "You're an artist?" John spoke up for the first time.
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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  • Jamie_Walker_7763
    Jamie_Walker_77632yr
    Commented

    I have a bad feeling about Hazel being around the groomsmen.

    "Ah, well, we'll be eating soon so don't worry your pretty little head about it," Eva replied with a cheerful smile. "Let's go sit by some of the groomsmen. This single is ready to mingle."
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    Hazel in the Demon's Den
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