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Heyooo. Sorry for not giving any news, I've been quite busy this week and I actually published a chap last Sunday, everything went smoothly on Royalroad but something happened on webnovel and the chap wasn't released. I've republished it. See ya tomorrow for the next chap!
First 4 chapters here, nothing to say except that this story is starting very very very very very very well. The atmosphere is relaxing and immersive, we can feel the emotions of the characters through the author's writing which is something that is not easy to do and with a vocabulary and grammar impeccable. Looking forward to reading the rest of it !
AAAAAAAAAAAAAH !!!! That was not what I was going foooor hahaha
yeeees
Sorry about that. I will be fixing mistakes this week end. I will add context and thoughts to better explain his decision.
What about the Goddess of Magic's blessing supposed to block it ?
"Sword Dancer" is the elven name of "Elemental Lord" (used by humans). Refer to chapter 423 ^^
If I recall correctly, "Sword Dancer" is the elven name for "Elemental Lord" for humans. Each race named them differently, but ultimately, they are the same. I think...
The story is structured and well built. There is a logical progression, although some political and ideological beliefs of the author make their way in, creating an awkward atmosphere, it remains subtil overall. The magical background is logical, structure even though some details or forgotten over the chapters, it still remains straight and follow the road it has begun.