Mangaholic24_7
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Honestly, your descriptions are excellent. I feel like you are doing really well by describing to the readers. The way your writing keeps improving and the way the story unfolds is genuinely superb. A little feedback is that maybe if you would like, instead of saying what the person feels, try to describe the feeling that way it can draw the readers in. Otherwise, I believe you have don grade with characters and everything.
Maybe you would make ‘doeS not trample on the weak nor fear the strong’
Great use of descriptive words. Making use of better and not so common words!
We want more !