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Dylan_Davis_93292yrCommentedagreeing with the others, not a fan of a chapter being primarily a recap of his skills. I also couldn't tell what's new and what's not. also having him and Lillith arguing like that in the end just felt forced. Sometimes the story pacing is giving me whiplash.
Ch 314 314 - Unforeseen consequences- Dylan_Davis_93292yrCommentedCh 301 301 - The First Demon
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Who is Noha, I thought his name was Noah
Almost as if by magic, the tension was released and a good portion of the blessed fell into laghter at seing everyone's reaction to his clear joke. Actually, not just a good portion, all but three of them were laughing. The healer, who just relaxed onto her chair with a silent and happy expression while blushing. The bearded warrior, who looked at him with a serious expression, trying to understand the reasons for why he would do this. And the Leader, who laughed awkwardly with a drop of sweat flowing down his temple. He was happy that Noha had accepted his invitation, and that everyone was happy he accepted it, but for a second, he feared he had been refused in front of everybody. He, a B Rank Blessed. It was not often he felt this kind of strange sensation. His heart was pounding on his chest, and while the rest of his sentence had cleared all doubt, he was still feeling the rush, the nervousness, the emotion he normally only felt when fighting the strongest of bosses in the Fortresses he delved into. And as he finally comprehended what had just happened and started to relax again, a thought was engraved deep into his soul, enough that, while laughing and dropping his head to grab his cup, his thoughts slipped from his lips into a sentence he should not have said. - Dylan_Davis_93292yrCommented
Sorry I have to ask/nitpick on this but, does Noah know this or think this? This statement seems out of place. Why are we being told that this could happen had the creature had a soul. I dont think this fits in the current narrative structure. I'm loving the story but moments like these tens to take me out of the story.
But what the captain didn't know was that the reason the speed was so slow for the ice knight to melt was because the monster had no soul. If it had had a soul, that speed would have been at least 2x faster, or maybe even more, depending on its sin. But still, it would be almost impossible to melt the monster in a few seconds, which would be fatal for Noah to deal with an enemy like that. But still, managing to melt the ice knight the captain was so pleased with was something that would make any Blessed Rank C extremely proud to the point where he could brag to his friends every night for a year. - Dylan_Davis_93292yrCommentedCh 240 240 - Bat
- Dylan_Davis_93293yrCommentedCh 208 208 - Rest
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At first I was pretty interested, I'm a sucker for reincarnated to the past stories. But somehow only a few days into the past people were powering up so fast and it felt like everyone had knowledge of the future. They were talking about future events that would happen and grades/levels that almost no one should have known about. Plus the descriptor of the MCs power and his growth should have made his power completely dwarf everyone within moments yet some people could put up semblance of a fight.
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I like the story but I feel the biggest problem is sometimes the power scaling happens too fast. it's kind of a problem with most LitRPGs where the main character gets too strong too fast and then everyone else around them scales overtime so I can't directly fault this story for falling into the trope. I do love the concept but it's not always clear what makes a god a Higher, Lesser, or Demigod. I wish we were given a list earlier or at least what constitutes and more differences between the Higher and Lesser beings. I'm sure we will get more elaboration but at the time of this review I don't think it's entirely clear.