so I just re-read the first chapter and to honest I really can't find any mistake .also logic is there too . so keep up the good work .it would be great if you could do the same to other chapters. like when he goes outside of sect to do mission and he has to travel 1000 miles to reach that forest and he like run at full speed & in half a day he is there . what I mean to say is that it's a little u know too much. like he is just in the mortal stage of his cultivation so u know 🙄 and when u r updating the chapters pay attention to the trial arc it need work .well hope to see your good work [img=recommend][img=strong]

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well to be honest ever since the trial started the sentences harmony are a little bit off . but well it's not that bad

recently the sentences are little mixed up😅

wonder what's happening ?🧐

🤩🤩🤗🤗😁😁

thanks for the chapter

yup I can that and your narration or should the sentences are well made and one more thing DON'T GIVE UP 💪💪💪

thanks for the chapter

it's good to see the villagers care 😊

things went from 0 to 10 real quick🤯thanks for the chapter 👍

thanks for the chapter

everything is good so far and in previous chapter fight scene was also good but just tone down the drama just a little bit . like when he was running through the forest to save the village .I mean his first focus should his and when he saw the monster then he should said all those things like hope etc and like I said everything is good so far👍

where is the Grand dao of CHAD