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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    so I just re-read the first chapter and to honest I really can't find any mistake .also logic is there too . so keep up the good work .it would be great if you could do the same to other chapters. like when he goes outside of sect to do mission and he has to travel 1000 miles to reach that forest and he like run at full speed & in half a day he is there . what I mean to say is that it's a little u know too much. like he is just in the mortal stage of his cultivation so u know 🙄 and when u r updating the chapters pay attention to the trial arc it need work .well hope to see your good work [img=recommend][img=strong]

    Ch 28 Chapter 38: Mirage Spreading
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    I'm gonna check it in a while [img=Feeling it]

    Ch 28 Chapter 38: Mirage Spreading
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    well to be honest ever since the trial started the sentences harmony are a little bit off . but well it's not that bad

    Ch 28 Chapter 38: Mirage Spreading
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    recently the sentences are little mixed up😅

    Ch 28 Chapter 38: Mirage Spreading
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    wonder what's happening ?🧐

    Ch 27 Chapter 36: Elder Wu
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    🤩🤩🤗🤗😁😁

    Ch 17 Chapter 18: Barrier - III
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 17 Chapter 18: Barrier - III
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Replied to Supreme_V

    yup I can that and your narration or should the sentences are well made and one more thing DON'T GIVE UP 💪💪💪

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 : Lifeflare
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 : Lifeflare
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    it's good to see the villagers care 😊

    Ch 13 Chapter 13 : Awaken
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    things went from 0 to 10 real quick🤯thanks for the chapter 👍

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Fight to death -II {The Relighting Fire}
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 : Fight to death - I
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi8mth
    Commented

    everything is good so far and in previous chapter fight scene was also good but just tone down the drama just a little bit . like when he was running through the forest to save the village .I mean his first focus should his and when he saw the monster then he should said all those things like hope etc and like I said everything is good so far👍

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: Horror
    I Can Copy Talents Unlimitedly
    Eastern · Supreme_V
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  • Zafar_ghazi
    Zafar_ghazi1yr
    Commented

    where is the Grand dao of CHAD

    Ch 262 Contract with Beloved
    Transmigrated Scoundrel's Exchange System
    Eastern · Daoist_Drumstick
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