Sorry, I am not wild about reader guided stories. I am enjoying the way yiu have been creating and guiding the story and that could change if readers start to be involved.

I haven't even figured how to get stones beyond the one I started with and you already have that one :)

I like the fact that each dormitory had one of the outstanding instructors

Congrats on the contract! That is wonderful :)

That may be true, but earth us also likely to be slow and cumbersome. Lightning and fire are fast, I would imagine water is dexterous, etc.

Always nice to see the haughty get their comeuppance !

Perhaps the All Father was listening... or that ever popular demigod XLax!

... deep trouble :)

Hoping Blake will not only win but the use of a kill attack will get the obnoxious noble in deed trouble :)

Good question. The closest I have come is in Boot Camp when the DI threw my rifle at me. Had I not caught it, it would have hit me in the throat. Instead, the handguards just cut the palm of my hand.

Sorry you were feeling poorly. Get better!

I would guess perhaps the power of the all-father is related to the power of his followers/creations. If their war decimates them, this hurts him. Alternatively, he is aware of some greater outside threat and knows they need to build their power, not lessen it.

So far the Prince is interesting. He seems to be decent but I have to wonder if he us anticipating trouble with the nobles and therefore supporting the commoners more than he might do otherwise. Also, is putting your story on my reading list the same as adding to my library?

Figured out how to add it to my reading list. I like it so far!

Not so strange that he would split up. The idea was that splitting up would help all of them, not just himself.

ok.. that makes sense... I saw something about points or chips or something. Those are used to purchase additional chapters?

I very much enjoyed the opening chapter posted in the Facebook ad so I downloaded the app to get the rest. I was very disappointed find they didn't bother to link to the book so I could find it. I finally googled the first line to find it and then find that not only is the book apparently not finished yet, there is less here than there was in the ad. This isn't a good way to push your app. I look forward to someday being able to read the book.