the story is really promising, a lot of things are not clear yet, but I like how it's going and how you only give subtle hints about what the outside world looks like, the magic system is also interesting, you didn't reveal much about it tho.

a good story with a fun way of writing, but you need to give it a read for more than one chapter to be able to feel its beauty, the only downside there is the rate of updates, it is slow.