this is a wholly good read. I've been reading it for well over a year,and my attention span is severely lacking.

love this story.[img=recommend](exp sect help me please)

I hope this is truth.(exp please)

Absolutely love this story, started reading it and fell in love.

O foibd this during a free read and read the entire thing that day, fabulous read. if you do eastern fantasy/cultiva ting novels i recommend.

i love your story. very hearyfelt and emotional. keep up the terrific work!

i dont know if this is a translation error or an author error but the names of characters are almost continuously changing to a drastic degree

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I like the story, but some parts are either repeated or overly drawn out working makes it less than it should be.

After reading the Trial Read I do enjoy the story, and the world seems to be very well built. Truthfully the only issues I discovered were rather trivial. the author seems to have thought out well the story and is(as I saw so far) building deeper characters with each chapter. My main concern is that the M.C. might be another "I am always the best because my system cheats" which isn't necessarily bad when combined with an immersive, thought and plot driven narrative. my low ratings could possibly be changed upon further introduction to the story...I feel the 19 chapters given simply isn't enough to properly gauge the author's intended wonderful crafted story. kudos to the author, from what I've read, I will most likely purchase at least a few chapters when the story is fully published.(classic cheap skate grin) [img=recommend]

your doubling paragraphs makes the chapter seem bigger. I hope this an accident

gale will gs is an equipment I believe, where fusion seams to be full blown combination

in thw paragraph ending in the numerical 53. I believe room is the word? otherwise fantastic story so far

privlaged platform. :(

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