The main characters actions are well written. Someone who has experienced abuse, and been kept away from the world would definitely latch on to the first 'nice' person.

Mmm that's a hard no from me...

Wow, this is great so far! I am impressed with how genuine Stella's character is. Someone abused and battered would definitely not know how to respond to kindness. Well done author 👏

Yes! Glad this was added...she definitely assaulted him. He was an unwilling participant. CONSENT IS IMPORTANT.

Absolutely! Sometimes we, as authors, over explain instead of letting our readers come to conclusions without explain it to them. For example you might say: Telling - Dominic was mad as he squinted his eyes at Asher Showing - Dominic scrutinized Asher Either way you are conveying the same message, but when you show you are allowing the reader to discover how the characters are feeling instead of telling them. A good indicator of telling are any sentences that say: -someone was an adjective or -somone felt an adjective hope this clears up any confusion 🙏

Does the rest of the pack respect Asher, if their alpha clearly doesn't? Haven't seen an interaction between Dominic and Asher in public, but I'm assuming it isn't pleasant.

Hello Author! Love the storyline. I'd encourage you to watch some videos about showing verses telling when writing. I appreciate how visual your writing is, and I think showing would enhance it a lot (it helped me a lot). Keep writing!