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Paki_Paki

Paki_Paki

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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki1mth
    Replied to TribeOfOne

    I guess in the original it must be houtian and xiantian. Those match with pre heaven and post heaven

    Three realms of the Martial Path: Body Fortification, Post-Heaven, and Pre-Heaven.
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    Clan Leader: My strength equals to that of the entire clan
    Eastern · MoBei is MoBei
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki3mth
    Replied to Madsage

    It's because in ancient china one hour = two of our current hours

    "Because the rewards you get can be exchanged for time for cultivation in the system. The time flow of the system is three to one compared to the outside world. That means, if you cultivate in the system for three '2-hour periods', only one '2-hour period' shows as passed in the outside world."
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    Peerless Martial Arts System
    Action · Hazy Grass
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki4mth
    Commented

    probably Master Aunt

    If they are in two different realms, for instance, a Foundation Establishment Stage Cultivator and a Qi Cultivation Stage Cultivator, the latter would call the former Master Uncle or Master Uncle.
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    I Can Accumulate Proficiency, Starting from Alchemy
    Eastern · March of the Groping Fish
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki4mth
    Commented

    keep it up👍

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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki4mth
    Commented

    Good stuff, keep it up 👍

    Ch 17 Class Selection
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    Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery
    Fantasy · TheOneWho_Asked
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Commented

    Good start. Keep writing I feel it's going to be even better later

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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Posted

    I've read 50 chapters so it's time for a review. I think this novel is written by a human but heavily edited by ChatGPT. Overall it's good, but some parts of it are really cringe, "power of love" and stuff like that around chapter 45. This can of stuff come very quickly with ChatGpT. Overall the story is not bad but not great either. Sure the writing quality is good but it is bearing the style of chatGPT and is sometimes too much.

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    Infinite Paths: The Raging Phoenix
    Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Commented

    It's a misconception. Only water filled with minerals and other stuff is a good conductive. Pure water without any impurities is a very good insulant.

    "Looks like you missed your science classes in school. Your water power only amplifies the effect of my lightning. Water always conducts electricity efficiently," Long Tian taunted, his grin laced with mockery.
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    Systemless Villain
    Eastern · abinn
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Replied to KingSloth

    Usually we say regressed for this situation

    "I've reincarnated!"
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    Getting Invincible in the Invasion of Online Games by Spending 90 Billion Yuan
    Urban · Love Of The Sky
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Commented

    Keep it up

    Ch 2 Receiving the system rewards
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    Top tier providence: becoming the supreme Buddhist
    Fantasy · anduril_soft
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Posted

    Not bad, please ask chat got to fix all the mispels, gender error (he instead of she etc)

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    Thousandfold Multiplier System In The Cultivation World!
    Eastern · AgamYupi02
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Commented

    Good stuff author, I can see you improving with every chapter. Don't drop it đŸ’Ș

    Whether she was a real phoenix or just a chicken with phoenix feathers pretending to be a phoenix, the truth was about to be revealed.
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    I Just Wanted to Live, but I Somehow Became Better Than the Male Lead
    Fantasy · Parth_kokare
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki5mth
    Commented

    This chapter is a mess. please fix it and put some punctuation so we know when he is talking with the system like ' or [ ]

    Ch 2 Volume 1 Chapter 2: Transcend
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    I Just Wanted to Live, but I Somehow Became Better Than the Male Lead
    Fantasy · Parth_kokare
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Commented

    pretty sure you messed up the chapter order for the last 3

    Ch 51 Wormhole Creation for Dummies
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    Reborn as a Demonic Tree
    Fantasy · lneedtocheel
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Posted

    Very nice book, the grammar is great. There are some words that like spaces in between sometimes (especially in the first chapter but it gets better after). It's the story of a tree with a sign in system so naturally the action with the MC is limited since he can't move. He can still extend his roots and stuff so he activity range increases over time. I like it, keep going author! (chapter 49 and 50 are reversed btw)

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    Reborn as a Demonic Tree
    Fantasy · lneedtocheel
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Commented

    most o the ressources => most of the ressources

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    Myriad Paths of Magic
    Fantasy · Dhruv_Shah_9581
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Commented

    ChatGPT strikes again. There is obviously a lot of editing but I can smell chatGPT. There are always some things that are weird with chaptgpt stories. In this chapter we have some villagers that talk like old sages, the girl talking about the heart like a compass and things like those. Another thing with chatGPT stories is that they are always wholesome, no villagers having ideas about stealing the mirror and so on.

    Ch 1 Awakenings
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    The Path of Celestial Essence
    Fantasy · LazyCouchPotato
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Commented

    Good stuff, keep it up

    Ch 28 The Reckoning
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    Chaos Guide
    Fantasy · Slumbering_Dragon_
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Commented

    Good stuff, keep it up.

    Ch 2 Test of power
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    Rise of the Celestial Blade: Duan Lingtian's Path to Supremacy
    Eastern · kingtosh_01
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  • Paki_Paki
    Paki_Paki7mth
    Replied to Paki_Paki

    Spoilery followup;The MC comes in contact with the upper world after 200 chapters so you can say this novel is quite fast paced

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    Invincible Conqueror Huang Xiaolong
    Fantasy · Benjamin_Green
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