Paki_Paki
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I guess in the original it must be houtian and xiantian. Those match with pre heaven and post heaven
It's because in ancient china one hour = two of our current hours
probably Master Aunt
keep it upđ
Good start. Keep writing I feel it's going to be even better later
I've read 50 chapters so it's time for a review. I think this novel is written by a human but heavily edited by ChatGPT. Overall it's good, but some parts of it are really cringe, "power of love" and stuff like that around chapter 45. This can of stuff come very quickly with ChatGpT. Overall the story is not bad but not great either. Sure the writing quality is good but it is bearing the style of chatGPT and is sometimes too much.
It's a misconception. Only water filled with minerals and other stuff is a good conductive. Pure water without any impurities is a very good insulant.
Usually we say regressed for this situation
Good stuff author, I can see you improving with every chapter. Don't drop it đȘ
Very nice book, the grammar is great. There are some words that like spaces in between sometimes (especially in the first chapter but it gets better after). It's the story of a tree with a sign in system so naturally the action with the MC is limited since he can't move. He can still extend his roots and stuff so he activity range increases over time. I like it, keep going author! (chapter 49 and 50 are reversed btw)
most o the ressources => most of the ressources
ChatGPT strikes again. There is obviously a lot of editing but I can smell chatGPT. There are always some things that are weird with chaptgpt stories. In this chapter we have some villagers that talk like old sages, the girl talking about the heart like a compass and things like those. Another thing with chatGPT stories is that they are always wholesome, no villagers having ideas about stealing the mirror and so on.